My First Writing
Look at the picture.This is my first writing in the App, if you could tell me the wrong with my writing, I will very appreciate with you. Best wish!🤓🤩
Hi William, the following is how I would write the letter:
Dear Sir/ Madame,
I booked a room of your hotel for my friend John yesterday, unfortunately, he will have to look after(/take care of) his grandmother, therefore wouldn't be able to make it.
He was very excited about going on a trip in our city for the upcoming week, he had sent me several emails about it. Last week, he told me he would like to book a hotel room, so I booked a room of yours. Last night, he called and explained that he'd have to look after his grandmother in the hospital because his parents are busy working at the moment, so he'd have to put off the plan for a week.
If you could help me with re-booking the room, I'd really appreciate it. Please let me know, thank you.
Best wishes
William
Hope this helps! Happy to know if there are any errors in my version too:)