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Hello , I come from China . Please point out the mistakes in my composition . I will be glad to do the same for you .
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    At that moment, with the crowd watching me, I was not afraid in the ordinary sense, as I would have been if I had been alone. Would you please rewrite it to make it easier to understand? And what's the meaning of "in the ordinary sense" and the function of "as"? Many thanks. My guess: When many people watch me, I am not afraid. When I am alone, I am afraid. in the ordinary sense = generally as = though/although
    April 15, 2022
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    Let us be friends I am also univ. student. You can add my Wechat CYR2001710
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    March 25, 2022
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    What's the nuances between these sentences? 1a He seized the child's collar 1b He seized the child by the collar 2a The minister kissed the Queen on the hand 2b The minister kissed the Queen's hand
    March 25, 2022
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  • Posted
    Some complaints about my roommates I hate my roommates. They are very noisy. They will yell and curse when they are playing online games. I do not really understand them. I also want to curse them loudly, but I chose to tolerate. After all, we live in the same dormitory. I should try to communicate with them.
    November 24, 2021
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    November 22, 2021
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    Today I went out for fun. Around 9 o'clock in the morning, I went to the downtown by bus. I went to the suburb by subway. I must say that, the subway which I took is the most advanced and fastest in China. Its ighest speed is 161 kmph. I went to the most remote area in Guangzhou within just 40 minutes, which may take some hours in before. The terminal of the subway is in a not-developed area, where I can see many farmlands. I got lost there. But with the help of E-map, I went to the town and ate some noddles. After having my lunch, I went back to the downtown by subway. I arrivied in the downtown at about 3 o'clock in the afternoon. I went to the Guangzhou Metro Museum. I have known many knowledges about subway. Then I bought a cup of coffee and a piece of cake. After eating them, I took a tram which allows me to admire the scenery of Guangzhou city. The afternoon and evening were so beautiful that I almost forgot about the time. But I got lost again. Finally, I went back to the school at about 9 o'clock in the evening. It is a tiring but happy day. I went through alomost half of Guangzhou city. Plusing with my former journey, now I can say that my footprint is almost incluing the whole Guangzhou city.
    November 21, 2021
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  • Corrected
    今天吃完晚餐后,我还是觉得有点饿,所以我去厨房看看有什么吃的,呀,我找到两个小面包。我休息一下,一边吃一边听音乐。而且看(着?)天空的云经过了(飘过?),好放松(惬意?)唷!我刚刚看天气预报,未来几天的天气都很好,可是明天下午会下小雨,幸好晚上阳光再灿烂(晚上阳光灿烂sunny?),虽然这几天的气温有点热,但是看阳光的闪光真美哦!看着我总是觉得很惬意,特别是看日落,哇(……似乎还有话?)!

    基本能传递意思,比我的英语作文好多了(:-D)总体来说有点口语化(如果这是你的目的,那我无话可说),个别地方可能欠妥当。加油!
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    July 10, 2020
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    Composition 2 This is my composition . Please help me modify it . You can change the content to let it be better. Thank you very much . Knowing that a gala will be held, I am writing to take part in the gala. I think that this is an awesome opportunity to know other culture and show our culture to other people. Not only can we broader our horizon, but also can we know more friends. It must be very interesting. We are going to perform Beijing Opera. It is our national treasure. It dates back to Qing Dynasty. It is liked by the king. And people today also like it very much. We do not have enough tools, but we will try our best to perform it well. I advised that you make a plan for the various possible situation in advance, so that you won't be nervous when something bad happens. I am looking forward to your early reply.
    March 14, 2020
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    Composition 1 This is my composition . Please help me modify it . Thank you very much . How is everything going with you ? Our school decides to hold a community service in Fumin Village next Saturday . I know that you are interested with community service , so let me introduce the activity for you . The purpose of the community service is to let us know the importance of labour . Some students do not realize it . We need gloves , broom and watering pot . We will clean up the rubbish , remove the grass and water the crops .Through the community service , we can relax ourselves and know the importance of labour .It is not only interesting but also meaningful . It must be an awesome experience .I sincerely invite you come and take part in it . Please tell me if you will come . I am looking forward to your early reply .
    March 8, 2020
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  • Answered
    English sentences with structures like “as A does X, B does Y” can be quite tricky to translate into Mandarin.They usually contain ‘as’ or ‘with’, and express related situations or causal relationships.The Mandarin 随着 … 而 structure is very useful for expressing this.The general format is like this: [NP] 随着 [NP] 而 [VP] (NP is 'noun phrase', VP is 'verb phrase') The difficulty is that it doesn’t mirror the English equivalent exactly. In English, the causal event can be expressed with a verb or a noun, whereas in this Mandarin structure it can only be expressed with a noun. For example, in English it might be: “As global warming increases, sea levels get higher and higher. ”But this would have to be rendered with a noun in the Mandarin 随着 structure: 海面随着全球变暖的增长而越来越高。i.e. “With the increase of global warming, sea levels get higher and higher.” More examples: 韩国随着朝鲜的外患而在南边集结军队。 Hánguó suízhe cháoxiǎn de wài huàn ér zài biānjiè fùjìn jíjié jūnduì. “As North Korea displays aggression, South Korea concentrates its forces near the border.” 学习语言随着Skype的发行而变得更容易。 Xuéxí yǔyán suízhe Skype de fāxíng ér biàn děi gèng róngyì. “With the release of Skype, studying languages has become easier.” 树上的叶子随着冬天的到来而掉下去。 Shù shàng de yèzi suízhe dōngtiān de dàolái ér diàoxià qù. “With the arrival of winter, the leaves on the trees fall down.” 我的生活随着时间的推移而变得越来越坏。 Wǒ de shēnghuó suízhe shíjiān de tuīyí ér biàn děi yuèláiyuè huài. “As time goes on, my life gets worse and worse.” 我随着他对Justin Bieber的兴趣而不能爱他。 Wǒ suízhe tā duì Justin Bieber de xìngqu ér jiù bù néng ài tā. “With his interest in Justin Bieber, I just couldn’t love him.” Source : https://eastasiastudent.net/china/mandarin/suizhe-er-with-as/ In my own word , I think that 随着A而B means when A happens , as a result , B happens . My English is not good , I wish you can understand my words . Moreover , I must emphasis that I am not a professtional teacher , this is my own opinion .
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    March 6, 2020
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