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Composition 1 This is my composition . Please help me modify it . Thank you very much . How is everything going with you ? Our school decides to hold a community service in Fumin Village next Saturday . I know that you are interested with community service , so let me introduce the activity for you . The purpose of the community service is to let us know the importance of labour . Some students do not realize it . We need gloves , broom and watering pot . We will clean up the rubbish , remove the grass and water the crops .Through the community service , we can relax ourselves and know the importance of labour .It is not only interesting but also meaningful . It must be an awesome experience .I sincerely invite you come and take part in it . Please tell me if you will come . I am looking forward to your early reply .

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Composition 1

This is my composition . Please help me modify it . Thank you very much .

How is everything going with you ? Our school has decided decides to do hold a community service in Fumin Village next Saturday . I know that you are interested in doing with community service , so let me introduce tell you about the activity for you . The purpose of the community service is to teach us let us know the importance of labour . Some students do not understand realize it . We need gloves, brooms and watering cans pot . We will clean up the rubbish, remove the grass and water the crops .Through the community service, we can relax ourselves and learn know the importance of physical labour. It is not only interesting but also meaningful . It will must be an awesome experience. I sincerely invite you to come and take part in it . Please let me know whether you are coming tell me if you will come . I am looking forward to your early reply .
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