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    On My life Fame, wealth, and knowledge are merely mundane possessions which could be achieved by anybody striving for them. But your experience and feelings concerning life are your own and not to be shared. No one can live your life once again after your death. A full awareness of this will dawn on you that the most important thing in your life is your distinctive individuality or something typical of yourself. What matters is not your worldly success but your peculiar insight into the significance of life and your commitment to it, which can polish your personality.
    May 18, 2020
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    scence in the night Seen dimly through the moonlight, the boundary wall looked enchanting and full of poetry. The white wall, black tiles and sapphire windows were all suffused with sparkling brilliance while the light that filtered out through the patterned blocks was transformed to a shining emerald green. A light breeze blew, swaying the tree branches and making the rays of light glimmer and dance as if a fairytale world were hidden deep within. Above the wall one could see the black roof of the building inside jutting into the night air, so that the wall suddenly seemed to transform, melting into the main building whose style it matched to perfection. The nearby road seemed to have changed too, as if it were the entrance to a scenic area or a cultural palace.
    May 11, 2020
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    Good Morning The sun wakes up, throws on red mantle and, rises gently up the crest of the extern mountain, radiating with glory, beaming with smiles and greeting “Good morning" to everybody. The merry larks, habitual early risers, dance gracefully from twigs to twigs and warble out sweet and melodious odes to the sun. Sunflowers, putting on their coronas decorated with twinkling dew drops, vie with each other to burst in all their glory toward the first gleams of the morning sun. Swarms of amorous bees, humming out lighthearted madrigals, fly into green clusters to bill and coo with the blossoms after their hearts. Immediately ensue puffing off of chimney smoke in the air, laughter and neigh, and wailing of horns from passing vehicles. The great earth has come to herself from a full night’s lethargic slumber!
    April 27, 2020
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    A picture of Sunflowers Before long, I began to miss the picture again. It seems as if man is like this sunflower, even in his after-life he still struggles to grasp the departing sun. Thus, I thought of the dark green wall and felt it had absorbed this brilliant golden light for the time being. In vain, I struggled to driveaway this lonely feeling which followed me like a shadow. With the lapse of time,the scene of golden yellow gradually faded in my memory and slowly became so estranged that it was almost forgotten.
    April 6, 2020
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  • Corrected
    疫情<s>之</s>过后的机会
    新型冠状病毒开始引发<s>的</s>危机<s>刚才开始</s>。<s>我们已经知道很多人有赚钱的问题</s>(据我们所知,很多人会面临经济危机:)<s>公司下岗很多人。</s>(很多工人下岗,)<s>还有公司不发款收入</s>(公司拖欠工资)。饭馆<s>,</s>、<s>衣服商店,</s>(服装店、)酒店<s>,</s>、<s>空机,</s>航空公司、剧院<s>。</s>(等行业都将受到严重影响。)<s>都有严重的问题</s>。<s>他们都输了。</s>(这些行业都在此次危机中损失惨重,)<s>谁可以赢了?危机利于谁?</s>(谁能成为此次危机中的赢家,获得利益呢?)
    首先是有钱的人。<s>由于破产的公司危机之后有钱的房地产可以找到便宜的机会。</s>(一些公司由于此次危机而破产,房地产商就可以以低廉的价格收购。)<s>如果强基础的公司可以支持两三月。</s>如果一些公司根基稳固,坚持两三个月,就可以在疫情之后<s>他们可以</s>找到新的<s>顾客</s>市场。
    其次<s>网络服务</s>电商行业,比如亚马孙<s>,</s>等电商平台的贸易销量<s>都</s>肯定会有所增加。<s>贸易。</s>
    病毒对各个行业造成的经济影响不尽相同<s>很不平</s>,很不公正<s>的</s>。


    总结及修改建议:


    1、中文偏动态,英文偏静态。例如:“新型冠状病毒开始引发危机”相比于“新型冠状病毒的危机刚才开始”更加动态;“强基础的公司”改为“公司根基稳固”
    2、中文喜流水短句,英文多长句。例如:“由于破产的公司危机之后有钱的房地产可以找到便宜的机会”改为“一些公司由于此次危机而破产,房地产商就可以以低廉的价格收购”
    3、英文喜欢用代词。例如:“他们都输了”改为“这些行业都在此次危机中损失惨重”
    4、中文重意合,英文重形合。例如:“谁可以赢了?危机利于谁?”“谁能成为此次危机中的赢家,获得利益呢?”
    5、中文喜欢用范畴词。例如:“网络服务”改为“电商行业”;“比如亚马孙”改为“比如亚马孙等电商平台”
    6、中英文标点符号不同。例如:“我们已经知道很多人有赚钱的问题。公司下岗很多人。还有公司不发款收入。饭馆,衣服商店,酒店,空机,剧院。都有严重的问题。”改为:“据我们所知,很多人会面临经济危机:很多工人下岗,公司拖欠工资。饭馆、服装店、酒店、航空公司、剧院等行业都将受到严重影响。”




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    April 6, 2020
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    Houses in Baiyangdian Baiyangdian was once known as “Northern Jiangnan”, literally the southern type of water town in the North China. But quite different from the village houses in the south of China, the design and construction of the cottages here have their distinctive features. Village houses in the south have sloping roofs to stand the rainy weather, while the cottages here have flat roofs to dry the harvest in the sun. And, every time the water flooded, the villagers had to move belongings in the room onto the roof. These cottages are so close to each other and some are almost connected.
    April 6, 2020
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    on Reading When life is not moving as we wish, literature provides us with something better than the reality, something reachable. The water in books is clearer, and the sky bluer; when we find no perfect love in real life, we read the eternal love in The Butterfly Lovers and Romeo and Juliet. Reading makes up for the ugliness and coarseness in real life.
    March 30, 2020
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    这个星期<s style="color: black; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">在</s>英国的<s style="color: black; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">都</s>商店都关掉了,所以我现在没有工作。我不知道这种状况要持续多久。整个城市空荡荡的<s style="color: black; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">城市也没有人,他们都在里面</s>。没有人出门,平时街上人特别多可是现在很安静。
    <s style="color: black; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">我觉得感谢都认识的人身体好。</s>我很感激上帝,我的亲朋好友都还很健康。今天是母亲节。<s style="color: black; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">虽然</s>我想去看看<s style="color: black; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">我的</s>妈妈,但是现在情况不允许。<s style="color: black; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">我想不是好主意。</s>午饭<s style="color: black; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">之</s>后我<s style="color: black; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">就要给她</s>打个电话告诉她,我给她买了束花。<s style="color: black; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">。我买了花我想给她。</s>
    <s style="color: black; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">一切变化得很快。咱们是今年有计划的。但是现在大家,都世界不知道什么明天来。</s>计划不如变换,原来的年计划都被打乱了。但是没办法,谁都不知道明天会怎样。
    我希望大家都安<s style="color: black; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">全</s>好。<s style="color: black; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">我们住在奇怪得时间。</s>这段时间很诡异。
    <s style="color: black; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">你的经验是什么样?</s>你有什么感受呢?

    总结:
    1.英语中表达空间关系的介词,在汉语中并不需要直接写出来,句意表达即可。(这个星期在英国的都商店都关掉了)
    2.写中文时,适当添加“范畴词”便于理解。(我不知道这种状况要持续多久)
    3.恰当的运用“正反译”技巧,可以使表达更加清晰明确,符合目的语表达习惯。(整个城市空荡荡的 VS.城市也没有人,他们都在里面。
    4.汉语不同于英语,它属于孤立语,几乎没有词形变化,但是可以通过一些副词、助词等来表现时态。
    (要打电话——将来时,买了——过去时)
    5.了解目的语的习惯表达真的很重要。
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    March 30, 2020
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    the New Year The reasons for the elders’mixed feelings about the New Year, I think, come down to the following two ones. On the one hand, celebrating the New Year means a great expense to them that is often not inculded in the budget. On the other hand, the fleeting time exerts considerable pressure on them. Kids may say excitedly that they begin another year in their life after the NewYear; while, elders may sigh, “Well, I’ve become one year older!” For the kids, the New Year means that they are making progress in the most brilliant part of their life。 On the contrary, for the elders, it’s an indication that they are sliding into their declining years.
    March 23, 2020
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    今天一整天都青天,上午还有点凉,但下午的气温好舒服

    今天一整天都<s style="background-color: yellow;">青</s>晴天,上午还有点凉,但下午<s style="background-color: yellow;">的气温</s>暖暖的,好舒服。上午我打开<s style="background-color: yellow;">了所有的</s>窗户,<s style="background-color: yellow;">让新鲜的空气进来</s>(呼吸新鲜空气),中午<s style="background-color: yellow;">我</s>站在阳台上,享受<s style="background-color: yellow;">了大</s>温暖阳光。下午<s style="background-color: yellow;">我们去散步了</s>(出门散步),看到很多小鸟,鸭子,<s style="background-color: yellow;">而且很多花和树木开花</s>(花朵,树木也开花了),<s style="background-color: yellow;">这样让</s>我觉得很平静,大自然真的好神奇!<s style="background-color: yellow;">我</s>刚才看了天气预报,过几天天气会像今天那么好,哇,好棒哦!<s style="background-color: yellow;">我觉得明天我的工作会特别多,特别是因为开始新的项目的关系,而且需要完成这个礼拜。</s>(明天要开始新的项目,而且这个礼拜就要完成,所以我觉得工作会很多。)


    一些中英文的差别,希望能帮助你学习汉语:
    1. 中文先因后果,英文先果后因。(最后一句)
    2. 英文中的物主代词,汉译时往往可以省略。(“我的工作”)
    3. 汉语习惯前一句话出现一个主语,后一句话如仍为同一主语, 就不必重复出现;英语习惯通常每一句话都有主语,人称代词作主语往往多次出现à中文重意合,英文重形合。(“我站在...”;“我们去...”)
    4. 汉语词语之间连接词用得不多,其上下逻辑关系常常是暗含的,有词语的词序来表示。英语则不然,连接词用得比较多à中文重意合,英文重形合。(“而且很多花...”)
    5. 中文主观性强,英文客观性强。(“这样让我觉得很平静”;“过几天会像今天那么好”英文会用it做主语,而中文要把“天气”补充出来。)
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    March 20, 2020
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