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Hey, I am Matthew and I stay in Sydney currently. I am looking for someone who can make friends and do language exchange. We can have variety topics from music, culture, food, to local news, while doing the exchange. Since it is more fun and efficient when learning becomes a joyful process.
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    the dry weather in Australia I still can't adjust myself to Australia weather condition, particularly in winter. The weather is too dry and it makes my nose bleed. Is there any suggestion to ease the situation? Although it is not a big thing, it is quite annoying and sometimes scary, when I wipe my nose :(
    May 29, 2012
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    sentence/vocab practice

    用詞彙練習: 

    1. 爵士樂音樂家的節奏力區像比其他音樂類強。 爵士音樂家的節奏感，比其他音樂類型音樂家還強。

    2. 無論如何，放棄暴力是全社會的利益。 

    3. 一旦小明的父母爆發吵架，<strike>它</strike>他就變成很沉默。 「它」是 it ；「她」是she ；「他」是he

    4. 日本海嘯發生之後，為使日本經濟得以保持活躍，許多國家當時<strike>斷定</strike>決定不要撤回投資。 
    the meaning of "斷定" is similar to "assert" , and it is more appropriate to use "決定" (decide)  here.

    5. 我看到他悶悶地<strike>嘆喟</strike>(喟嘆)嘆氣，就開始努力<strike>的</strike>地<strike>娛樂</strike>逗他。
    喟嘆 is a classical and ancient phrase, but your sentence is modern. I guess it is best not to put this phrase in.
    逗 = tease    another meaning of  逗 =   make someone happy 


    6. <strike>強道</strike>強盜距離我們不遠，我的朋友<strike>暫時</strike>假裝外套裡有一隻槍<strike>；</strike><wbr></wbr>，強盜立刻跑掉， 好骨氣耶!  
    I like you use 「耶」in this sentence. It shows your attitude. 

    7. 就那一個公司而言，在我們三個月監控<strike>的時間以</strike>後，發現它的製造<strike>優<wbr></wbr>惠</strike>利潤(profit?)實在不足。 

    8. 組織的<strike>疑惑</strike>問題(you can use "盲點 the blind side" , it will be more special or academic)是<strike>因為</strike>在於不知道最需要改善的環節在哪裡。 

    9. 儘管黃昏快來，她還是勇敢地回去救<strike>命</strike>剩下的<strike>辛存著</strike> 倖存者。 

    10. 我不是很喜歡搖滾樂。對我而言，它的旋律給<strike>我</strike>人太迫切的感覺。<wbr></wbr>我反而<strike>偏向</strike>偏愛比較<strike>安祥</strike>柔和的音樂。
    Reducing  " 我 ( I ) " ,  it sounds more natural.
    偏向 tend to; 偏愛 tend to love
    when seeing 安詳, normally, it remind us think about dead people ... 
    unless you say 寧靜安詳,  however, it refers to circumstances
     
    大概有不少問題啦! 可是我喜歡寫難一點的，否則<strike>不可以</strike>無法學到新的事請! 謝謝大家幫我改!
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    April 5, 2011
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    ----> 所。。。的。。。  I guess it means that you have to write down this kind of sentence  你所用的東西是我買的 or 你所想的正是我要說的
    #1 -- 他作為哲學家，所斷定得很深奧   他作為哲學家，所考慮的東西很深澳
    #2 -- 我的朋友很倒霉，他所接觸的事情就招致問題。  我的朋友很倒霉，他所接觸(經手)的東西也都跟著發生問題
    #3 -- 人眾太容易被說服，大公司所宣傳的產品賣掉。 民眾太容易被大公司所宣傳的商品說服(迷惑)，而購買。

    ----> 不過是  this phrase shows a little bit rude, cuz it contains "opposite" or "complain" meaning. so, the first sentence is  inappopriate to use in an office, especially to your boss.  But there's no mistakes in this sentence  
    #1 -- 我們達不到銷售額，不過是因為策略落伍了。 using comma makes people  read easily.
    #2 -- 他不願意跟你講話的原因，不過是他原本就很沉默。
    #3 -- 我的願望很單純，我不過是要喜悅地生活。
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    March 29, 2011
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