As a mom, I’d say my daily life *revolves around* my kid. I have to be in the house before she gets home from school. With limited time *in the* day, I try to do the things I want like learning English, exercising, and walking around. (in a list like this the verb tenses should match, so either "learn English, exercise, and walk around" or "learning English, exercising, and walking around") In the morning, I think of where to go and read or study. I used to go to book café that I like but when it’s lunch time, it’s so crowded that it’s hard to stay focused on my thing. I heard from news that some people go to cafes and spend the whole time studying there with just one coffee ordered, and the café owners don’t like them. I understand how they feel but at the same time I feel bad. Anyway, I like spring and fall because *it’s neither* hot nor cold and *they're the* perfect seasons to walk around. Good weather just makes me feel better and encourages me to do something.

maybe to explain in chinese, here "to mean" = 意味着 Just because garbage disposals can grind stuff 并不意味着 you can put bones in them.

They're both ok. In conversation most people would say imported cars. Usually you would need an '-ed' like "renovated cars" "painted cars" "washed cars" etc. However an "import car" is just a car term and it is completely acceptable, especially in writing. I'm guessing bc every word is capitalized this is the title of like an article or something where you want to talk about 6 cool cars, so use "import".

Here work doesn't refer to something you make, rather it's the effort put in.. 比如说 “花了好大工夫” = put in a lot of work. 这里 “工夫” 和 “work” 很类似

It's ok, but as a native english speaker I'm not sure I've ever heard the word "allured" in conversation... it means to tempt or lure but it's pretty much only used in books. People would just say: "His calm deep voice drew me in" or "I was attracted to his calm deep voice". Also for #3 it would be better to say "The young actress craved recognition and glory" or "The young actress had a craving for recognition and glory" but using "...craved for the..." sounds awkward.

willingness to be wrong = you can admit your mistakes. 如果莫人”has a willingness to be wrong", 他不是一个固执己见的人。如果他知道错了的话就别嘴硬