As a mom, I’d say my daily life *revolves around* my kid. I have to be in the house before she gets home from school. With limited time *in the* day, I try to do the things I want like learning English, exercising, and walking around. (in a list like this the verb tenses should match, so either "learn English, exercise, and walk around" or "learning English, exercising, and walking around") In the morning, I think of where to go and read or study. I used to go to book café that I like but when it’s lunch time, it’s so crowded that it’s hard to stay focused on my thing. I heard from news that some people go to cafes and spend the whole time studying there with just one coffee ordered, and the café owners don’t like them. I understand how they feel but at the same time I feel bad. Anyway, I like spring and fall because *it’s neither* hot nor cold and *they're the* perfect seasons to walk around. Good weather just makes me feel better and encourages me to do something.

Here's how I would say this. I am not an expert, but I hope this helps. As a mom, I’d say my daily life relies on my kid. As a mom my daily life revolves around my daughter. I have to be in the house before she gets home from school. I need to be home when she gets home from school. With a limited time of a day, I try to do what I want to like learning English, exercise and walking around. During the time I have for myself I try do the things I enjoy, such as learning English, exercising and going for walks. In the morning, I think of where to go and read or study. In the morning I decide where I want to go and what to read or study. I used to go to book café that I like but when it’s lunch time, it’s so crowded that it’s hard to stay focused on my thing. I used to go to a book cafe that I like at lunch time, but it's so crowded there it's hard to stay focused on my studies and reading. I heard from news that some people go to cafes and spend the whole time studying there with just one coffee ordered, and the café owners don’t like them. I heard on the news that some people go to cafes and spend all day studying with only ordering one coffee and that the cafe owners don't like it. I understand how they feel but at the same time I feel bad. I understand how they feel, so it makes me feel bad to do that. Anyway, I like spring and fall because neither it’s hot nor cold and perfect seasons to walk around. Also, I enjoy spring and fall the most because the weather isn't too hot or cold which makes them the perfect seasons for walking. Good weather just makes me feel better and encourages me to do something. Good weather makes me feel good and more energetic.