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朴实、真诚、有爱心。
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    你好 Mee，

    以下是我对你这则广告的修改，如下：

    我有一个问题。你怎么写一个公寓广告?

    一间卧室
    两个卫生间 （“两”卫生间显得你的措辞很不正式，很口语化；而用“两个”则显得更通顺，更正规。）
    一<font color="#ff0000">个</font>厨房 （“个”这个量词用法同上。）
    每月500元

    就你的格式来说，我想应该没有问题。我想只要你用词得当就行了，格式简介明了就可以了。

    看到刚才有人评论，顺便说一下：租房 rent a house 
                                                                房子出租  house for rent

    Taylor

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    March 22, 2011
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    First notebook entry: Introducing myself 1.I want to learn English well because I have to communicate with our US cllients every day 2. It is also because I love English and its culture.
    March 21, 2011
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