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    Can it be considered as a poem?....

    I can still hear
    The massive voice from the deep seas
    Do tears from the mermaid
    Still become of pearls?

    I can still see
    The beam of light illuminating from that fixed star
    Goes through the distances of ten million light-years
    To come here
    To meet me

    I can still remember
    The person I have loved
    But I cannot find him anymore
    Except in my dreams and memory

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    I have tried...but maybe a little silly...hope there's not too much wrong

    Honestly I would not say this is a peom. But anything is good as long as it express your thoughts and feelings. I can see the deep feelings, somewhat sorrowful, from this piece of work, and that is touching.
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    March 7, 2011
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    First notebook entry: Introducing myself Want to meet knowledgeable and considerate people here.
    March 3, 2011
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