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    Please correct my sentences

    Yesterday, I was shocked because my earphones broke. When I tried to use them, the right earphone was broken. I’ve been using them, but recently I've been wanting <s style="background-color: rgb(235, 214, 255);">the</s> wireless earphones, so it was good timing!!
    I will buy them this weekend. I can’t wait<s style="background-color: rgb(235, 214, 255);"> the time</s>!!

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    Hi Shirokuma,

    I made some slight edits to make your paragraph sound a little more natural; in English, earphones are plural, so when you mention the right or left one by themselves, it becomes singular (earphone).

    I hope this helps! I also recommended wireless earphones because the wire doesn't get in the way! :)
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    January 30, 2020
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    1: アレックス (２０２０年１月３０日) この人はアレックスです。アレックスは１９歳です。髪が短くて茶色いで、目が大きくて青いです。大学生で、コンビニでアルバイトをしています。今日はアレックスの休みですから、喫茶店に行きます。 --- English Reference: This is Aleks. He's 19 years old. He has short, brown hair and big, blue eyes. He's a university student and works part-time at a convenience store. Because it's his day off today, he'll be going to a coffee shop.
    January 30, 2020
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  • Corrected
    English Education for Kids (No.2)

    On the other hand, my daughter doesn’t seem to be enjoying learning English as much.

    When I go to her English School to pick her up, she is always playing around in the classroom with her classmates. So there might not be a problem, but she is always complaining to me about why she has to go to <s>the</s> English school. She knows it’s just because her parents want her to go <s>to the English school </s>and that it is not of her own free will.

    <s>And s</s> She said she wants to have more time to play with her friends.
    She prefers her friends from her kindergarten, and she also said friendship is the most important for her.
    Her words make my ears burn.

    Fortunately, not only my son but also my daughter has learned a lot of English and she is getting to be able to catch up English little by little.

    Fortunately, not only has my son learned a lot of English, but my daughter has also learned a lot and is able to catch up little by little.

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    Hi Yukiko,

    Here are some small corrections to make things sound a little more natural; I also included another version of your last sentence.

    I hope this helps, and I hope your daughter can eventually enjoy learning English as well!

    Christine
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    January 30, 2020
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  • Corrected
    Martin's corrections look good, just a spelling one from me:

    These elements are metal, earth, fire, wood, and water.

    Hope this helps as well!
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    January 29, 2020
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