Please correct my sentences
I was shocked yesterday, because my earphones broke. When I tried to use, the earphones correct part broken. I’ve been using it. But recently I’m thinking of want the wireless earphones, so it was good timing!!
I will buy it this weekend. I can’t wait the time!!
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Please correct my sentences
I was shocked yesterday, because my earphones broke. When I tried to use them, the earphones correct part broken just broke. I’ve been using it. But recently However, I’m I've recently been thinking of wanting the wireless earphones, so it was actually good timing!!
I will buy it the wireless earphones this weekend. I can’t wait the time!!
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Please correct my sentences
Yesterday, I was shocked because my earphones broke. When I tried to use them, the right earphone was broken. I’ve been using them, but recently I've been wanting the wireless earphones, so it was good timing!!
I will buy them this weekend. I can’t wait the time!!
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Hi Shirokuma,
I made some slight edits to make your paragraph sound a little more natural; in English, earphones are plural, so when you mention the right or left one by themselves, it becomes singular (earphone).
I hope this helps! I also recommended wireless earphones because the wire doesn't get in the way! :)
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