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a boring day.
It`s time to go back school. The place which I will go I am going to has the lowest temperature in China right now. Can you guess where it is? Yes, my college is located in Changchun. (It's) An old city covered by ice and snow in winter, and it is full of mystery.
Of course, I have no different from other students. whenver this time, I also don`t want to go back to school.Because of the comfortable life at home.
(可以说; "Of course, I don't have it any different than the other students. When we have to go to school, we don't really want to, because things are so comfortable at home.)
Every day,there are two dogs following me. They are my pets. I spend much time in taking care of them. The main reason is that my parents have to work all day. And my friends have been back to school. I`m free all day. Sure, I love them, too. I`m a caring girl.
Today, I prepare the lunch for myself as in the past as I've done before. The rice, eggs and tomatoes, and a cup of juice. As usual, my parents don`t go come back home for lunch. So, I have to enjoy the whole day (alone) with my cute dogs. What a boring day it is. today!
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0 votedFebruary 13, 20120First notebook entry: Introducing myself
Hi,guys.I'm Doris from China. I am an English major from Chongqing.
I come here to make friends and improve my English as well.
I hope we all can enjoy ourselves! ~ (not too sure about this one)Otherwise, I think it's a good entry, keep at it! :-)
0 votedFebruary 12, 20122First notebook entry: Introducing myself
Hello everybody!
I am so glad to be here and introduce myself.
I'm Freyar, a Sophomore students(1) at China hunan changsha.
I love English and i (2) 'm learning English .b(3)ut my English is not good now. so I wish I could have a greater opportunity to exercise (4) my English learning.
Is there somebody can help me ?(I would appreciate)
Hello freyar, I have put some red on where you need some correction. I will explain with numbers below:
1) You are ONE student. Students is when you are talking about more than 1 student.
2) Usually, when writing I, as in 我, you will need to write it with a capital (large) letter. I, not i.
3) English always starts sentences with a capital letter. It looks so much nicer, too, doesn't it? ; )
4) The word excercise is used about things like working out. Going outside and jogging, running, etc .. Those things are excercise. Practice is the word you are looking for!
The sentence, as I would have written it: So I want to get the opportunity to practice my English.
(I would appreciate) should be (I would appreciate it). : )
So, there you go, not too in depth, but I hope you understood that? Just ask if there is anything you need help with.
再见！
0 votedFebruary 26, 20111
