First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello everybody!  
I am so glad to be here and introduce myself.
I'm Freyar, a Sophomore students(1) at China hunan changsha.
I love English and i (2) 'm learning English .b(3)ut my English is not good now. so I wish I could have a greater opportunity to exercise (4) my English learning.
Is there somebody can help me ?(I would appreciate)

Hello freyar, I have put some red on where you need some correction. I will explain with numbers below:

1) You are ONE student. Students is when you are talking about more than 1 student.

2) Usually, when writing I, as in 我, you will need to write it with a capital (large) letter. I, not i. 

3) English always starts sentences with a capital letter. It looks so much nicer, too, doesn't it? ; )

4) The word excercise is used about things like working out. Going outside and jogging, running, etc .. Those things are excercise. Practice is the word you are looking for!

The sentence, as I would have written it: So I want to get the opportunity to practice my English.

(I would appreciate) should be (I would appreciate it). : )



So, there you go, not too in depth, but I hope you understood that? Just ask if there is anything you need help with.

再见！