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我来自广西南宁的一个小镇,现在正在西安的某所大学念书。在大学里,突然发现自己的英语着实很糟糕,而自己又一直为出国深造的目标奋斗着,所以必须狠狠的加把劲提高英语!
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    April 8, 2011
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    放射性污染很<strike>害怕</strike>可怕,因为我们看不了那个明确地影响多大(确定不了它到底有多大的影响?Sorry, I can't guess the meaning U want to express O(∩_∩)O~)。在美国东部和西部<strike>地方</strike>,核专家已经检测到了<strike>从福岛来的</strike>来自福岛的放射性物质。我听说有些在西部<strike>地方</strike>居住的人们正在寻求预防药。

    人类经历过和现在一样的状况,比如几十年前<strike>实施的很多</strike>进行很多次的大气层核试验。那时候,爆炸时放出的放射性物质和雨水一起<strike>到处下来了</strike>落下,落得到处都是。<font color="#ff0000">当时</font>饮用水含有的放射能与现在喝的水相比多多了,有人可能是不知为妙的情况(有人可能不知道这情况呢?Sorry, I can't guess the meaning U want to express O(∩_∩)O~)。

    切尔诺贝利<strike>事故</strike>事件<strike>似乎看起来</strike>看起来似乎比福岛的事故严重<strike>的</strike>得多,<strike>散乱</strike>散发了更多放射性物质<strike>了</strike>。从来,我们才知道那时候有些通过食物<strike>等等</strike>摄取碘-131的<strike>有些</strike>年轻人生了甲状腺癌。<strike>如此</strike>因此,带着孩子的母亲<strike>紧张地反应这件问题</strike>(对这个问题的紧张的反应)是<strike>当然</strike>理所当然的事<strike>的</strike>了。

    钚也是一个剧毒物质<strike>。</strike>,进入肺之后,它会沉积<strike>很久</strike>很长的一段时间,使得周围的组织被<strike>暴露</strike>破坏了。他们说,因为钚是很重的金属,所以除了爆炸区<strike>以外</strike>,这个物质不会落到很远的地方<strike>落下来</strike>。我听说只有离核电<strike>战</strike>站很近的地方<strike>只有</strike>才有被钚污染<strike>了</strike>的测量结果。

    自事故发生以来<strike>经过</strike>有两个多星期了,但我们还不能把握反应炉<strike>的正确</strike>确切的损害状况。今天他们才发现高浓度污染水正在流入海洋里。现在,那个核电<strike>战</strike>站<strike>一直还</strike>还一直把比较少的气体或液体放射性物质排放到空气中或海洋。我不知道那样状的况会持续很久<strike>时间</strike>的话对身体健康上的危险性是不是真的没有,<strike>而且</strike>再有,什么时候我们才把这个问题<strike>收敛起来。</strike>解决呢?

    世界上已经很久没有严重的核电<strike>战</strike>站事故<strike>持续很久时间</strike>了,<strike>推进</strike>开发核电<strike>战</strike>站的国家越来越多。我希望日本<strike>国家</strike>政府和<strike>另</strike>另外一些专门机构会发表不仅仅是基于测量的危险性的低估值,<strike>就是</strike>而是考虑到了的各种可能性和后果。现在的情形是在核电<strike>战</strike>站使用的核燃料<strike>之</strike>的一部分被泄露<strike>的</strike>。我想要很快地听到他们找到坏了的反应炉并把它给封闭掉的<strike>展望</strike>消息,并且他们找到能让更多放射性物质不会被排放的<strike>防止策</strike>对策。


    Very good!!

    嗯,其实您写得挺不错的,但要输入修改符号太麻烦了,所以才大片大片的删改!加油哈O(∩_∩)O~
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    April 2, 2011
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    March 29, 2011
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    Want To Bask In The Sun I want to bask in the sun. Recently, I feel sleepy and tired. I heard that some one who have Stay out of the sun for too long will feel tired very easily. I think this is quite correct . These months I stay in I stayed in the laboratory ,in the classroom or stayed in the dormitory only. I've had not do any sport for several months. I think should make some changes now ,just for my health.
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    年轻人总会有那么些淡淡的忧伤的,人总得找个地方叹口气发泄一下情绪的,QQ就是这么个地方。没事的,年轻人们依旧朝气蓬勃,依然在为美好的理想奋斗着,依然会开开心心的活着!我们很坚强的!

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    March 27, 2011
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    如果您已经把简体字学好了,那么繁体字是可以通过偶尔读些繁体字版的小说来慢慢认识的,不必刻意学习。繁体字在中国大陆除了书法之外用的不是不多,但在香港和台湾就很常用了!繁体字是一种很漂亮的文字哦!
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    March 27, 2011
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    虞晓余's notebook entry: Mar 27, 2011

    This is my first diary written in English. It's a new attempt, and it's a challenge for me.
    In the first place, I want to introduce me to you.
    I come from Nanning,The capital city of The Guangxi Zhuang Autonomous Region of China .But unfortunately, I can't speak the language of Zhuang. My native language is Cantonese, and I can speak Chinese well.
    I'm studying in a university in Xi'an. In the past year, I graduallycome to realize that I need to improve my English.And I want to study in the United States someday in the future.So here I am.
    I llike make frends with all kinds of peaple, and I want to chat with U all, in English,in Chinese or in Cantonese.
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    March 27, 2011
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    虞晓余's notebook entry: Mar 27, 2011

    This is my first diary written in English. It's a new attempt, and it's a challenge for me.
    In the first place, I want to introduce me to you.
    I come from Nanning, the capital city of The Guangxi Zhuang Autonomous Region of China .But unfortunately, I can't speak the language of Zhuang. My native language is Cantonese, and I can speak Chinese well.
    I'm studying in a university in Xi'an. In the past year, I gradually come to realize that I need to improve my English.And I want to study in the United States someday in the future.So I came here.
    I llike make frends with all kinds of peaple, and I want to chat with U all, in English,in Chinese or in Cantonese.
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    March 27, 2011
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    虞晓余's notebook entry: Mar 27, 2011 This is my first diary written in English. It's a new attempt, and it's a challenge for me. In the first place, I want to introduce me to you. I come from Nanning,The capital city of The Guangxi Zhuang Autonomous Region of China .But unfortunately, I can't speak the language of Zhuang. My native language is Cantonese, and I can speak Chinese well. I'm studying in a university in Xi'an. In the past year, I graduallycome to realize that I need to improve my English.And I want to study in the United States someday in the future.So I came here. I llike make frends with all kinds of peaple, and I want to chat with U all, in English,in Chinese or in Cantonese.
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