correct mistakes in my text please

I love <s>singing </s> to sing, but <s>once</s> I was teased once for having a deep <s>being a girl with a deeply</s> voice for a girl. So I <s>always</s> only sang when I<s>’m</s> was alone. My father had always wanted to hear <s>of</s> me sing, but I never was brave enough to do it <s>did so for lack of brave</s>. One day, he played my favorite song in the car on<s>to</s> the way home. As I saw the beautiful scenery outside, I began to sing in a low voice. My father pretended <s>to</s> he didn't hear <s>nothing</s> anything and so I sang louder than before <s>then my voice became loud than before</s>. When we arrived home, he said, “This is the best song I’ve ever heard.” After that, he was never afraid of singing in front of other people.

(Confused about the last sentence, do you mean to say that you were no longer afraid of singing in front of others or your father was no longer afraid..? )