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Ryan
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Apr 23, 2020
Hello, Sanfeng. You attended the TRIAL with me on Saturday, April 18, 2020. We primarily engaged in an INFORMAL DISCUSSION on the subject of “Food & Eating” from the following website: http://iteslj.org/questions/ You can review the questions that I asked you or view additional ones that are related to the subject of “Food & Eating” by visiting the following website: http://iteslj.org/questions/food.html I relished every moment of our conversation, and it was an absolute pleasure to receive the opportunity to converse with you. With sufficient and frequent practice, I firmly believe that you will soon be capable of expressing yourself substantially in English. You are an incredible student, and I am exceedingly delighted by your spirited personality. Overall, I am immensely proud of your commitment to achieving a higher LEVEL of proficiency in English. I merrily congratulate you on your current achievements. Thank you for attending the TRIAL with me. Sincerely, Ryan Shen
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    不同的①爱好

    1.我游泳游得很快，因为我真喜欢这个。
    (√，不过很口语化，书面的话要改)

    2. 我不喜欢玩儿电脑，因为这②<s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">是</s>对身体不好③<s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">也不有</s>还没意思。
    or:因为这不仅/既对身体不好而且/还没意思。

    3. 我妈妈非常喜欢唱歌！她唱得非常很好听。
    (√，不过我家这片的口语里“非常”相对少用，“很”/“特”/“特别” 这几个多用一点。)

    or:我妈妈特别爱唱歌，而且唱得可好听了！

    4. 我喜欢旅游，但是我④不常旅游<s>旅得不常常</s>。

    5. 喝冷水对身体不好。(√)

    6. 去年⑤我/朋友身体不好⑥，所以我⑦<s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">跟</s>和/跟着/带着朋友出去玩儿了。(句意歧义)

    7. 我喜欢穿漂亮的衣服，所以我⑧<s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">有太多了</s>衣服特别多。

    8. 我不喜欢跑步，但是我特别喜欢游泳。(√)
    9. 我很好的朋友唱歌唱得不好听，但是她跳舞跳得真很好。(√)

    10. 王小姐⑨<s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">饿汉</s>看书看得很慢。

    11. 这个菜很好吃，我⑩吃它吃得很快。

    12. 我(11)<s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">有很少钱</s>穷，请你能帮助我买这个手机。

    13. 我们过我的生日这个饭馆。这过得好玩。(这句，，，我也很迷。)

    14. 我爸爸喜欢看电视，但是我觉得(12)<s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">很多</s>经常看电视对眼睛不好。

    15. 李先生非常喜欢跑步，他(13)<s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">过第一个</s>这些比赛那能拿第一。
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    April 13, 2020
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    1.《禁酒命》前后(漏词了？)几家荷兰蒸酒公司在美国营业，

    2.但是几十年后<em>琴酒 </em>才又开始受欢迎。

    3.①现在它<em>特别 </em>流行，<em>以至于 </em>很多时髦的酒吧的酒单<em>都 </em>列着各种新的琴酒鸡尾酒。
    ②现在它<em>可 </em>流行<em>了</em>，好多<em>新潮 </em>的酒吧酒单上都列着各种<em>新款</em>的琴酒鸡尾酒。

    4.荷兰<em>从 </em>18世纪开始出口琴酒到中美洲与南美洲国家（比如阿根廷与苏里南）

    5.①在18与19世纪 琴酒尤其被欧洲人在他们的娱乐部<s>喝</s>、种植园和城堡<em>里喝</em>。(It's wired to talk in this way.)
    ②18到19世纪，尤其在欧洲人的俱乐部、植物园和城堡里，琴酒大受欢迎。
    (This way will not be that wired, but I don't know whether I explain your original meaning correctly.)

    6.考古学家在丛林<em>里</em>挖掘时

    7.比如在苏里南<em>的吧克种植园</em>

    8.从1760年开始，荷兰人跟“马龙人”（逃跑的奴隶）签订和平条约

    9. 比如举行祖先仪式的时候。
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    April 12, 2020
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    проверка написания текста

    1.①今天我妹妹生日。
    ②今天是我妹妹的生日。

    2.①她非常漂亮。
    ②她很靓。(靓 appears more colloquial.)

    3.我们一起去了中国饭馆给她过生日。

    4.①我给妹妹送了一个新手机。
    ②我送了妹妹一个新手机。

    5.①爸爸送给妹妹的那块手表很漂亮。
    ②爸爸送给妹妹的那块手表可漂亮了！
    (“可+adj+了” means “very”)

    6.①妹妹给我唱歌，唱得非常漂亮。
    ②妹妹给我唱了歌，唱得可好听了！

    7.①服务员给了我们些好吃的蛋糕。
    ②服务员送了我们些蛋糕，可好吃了！
    8.①我妹妹生日过得很开心，因为我们家很友好。 ②我们今天给妹妹过生日过的很开心，因为我们家很友好。
    ③因为我们家很友好，所以我们给妹妹过生日过的可开心了！

    Hope it can help you
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    April 10, 2020
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    我在学习汉语

    1. 我想学习中文因为我想上网。
    (①It's okay if you just use a single“想”,“要” is usually omitted
    ②“汉语”、“中文”、“普通话”，there are differences between these three words)

    2. 还因为纽约有很多中国的商店和饭店。
    (“还” usually appears in words groups like “还有”.还字单独出现的话，意思一般不完整)

    3. 我不太想会说。(“说” can be a vi.)

    4. 我只想能看得懂中文。(“够” is usually omitted.)
    5. 我的中文不好。

    6. ①我只学了四个月，几句话。
    ②我才学四个月，只学了几句话。
    ③四个月我只学了几句话。

    7. 我每天学习一个小时汉语。
    (√ Good job！坚持就是胜利)

    8. 我应该学习复杂的句子。
    9. 我只能看懂简单句子。
    10. 但是，听、说、写和语法还是很难。

    11. 四个月后我将去大学学汉语。
    (①“来”＝come,“去”＝go
    ②The words group“学习” is far more common than the verb meaning of “习”.)
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    April 9, 2020
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    April 6, 2020
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    A Letter in Reply(a composition in the exam) To dear ***, I'm so sorry to hear that you failed the exams,how unfortunate,so did I.But we know that in time everything will be fine.Exams are just a way to reveal our true ability,so whatever you feel after the exams,to find the problems we have should be in the first place.Here are some of my suggestions. I don't know if you would watch the opened book and keep drifting away as I did.I manage to this by doing some sports every day.Besides,I used to be sleepy in class as I didn't sleep well.Doing some meditation does benifit a lot.Go and just do some sports and meditation,it can't go wrong. Sincerely hope you can be alright soon and look forward to your reply. Yous,Li Hua
    April 6, 2020
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    January 4, 2020
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