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800字的作文
从4月29号到5月4号我没上学.第一个原因是从4月29号到5月1号是日放假,第二个原因是我们的学校让留学生旅行一下.
5月1号是劳动节,不少国家都过这个节日,在我的国家也 有这样的节日.我觉得很多人们工作太忙,太认真学习,所以他们非常喜欢劳动节,因为可以休息一下.我看见有些中国学生利用这假期回家.很多人去玩儿,白天的时候看劳动节游行,晚上的时候看烟花.我觉得中国人放烟火放得多好好多了,是非常好看的!我来中国以前一次也没看过春节烟火那么好看.( 在我来中国之前没见过这么好看的烟火)optional
在我们的学校留学生还有三四天的自由时间,所以我们可以去别的城市看一看景点. 大连是一个新的城市,没有古典景点(古迹),所以有些学生去北京,沈阳等等.旅行的时候他们也可以练习口语, 因为要买票,预订房间,问陌生人怎么走等.
有的同学们去了旅行,有的在大连休息.因为那些天以后就有期中考试,所以我没去旅行,该复习复习了.下次有放假的时候我希望去北京或者西安.我在网上看见那些城市的照片,觉得那里有很多好看的地方.如果夏天没回国就去旅行.
4月30号一个朋友从广州来过看我. 我好久没看见他,所以高兴得像发狂一样.他在一家中国公司工作,每天很忙,所以来休息一下.我给他介绍我的中国朋友们,我们每天一起去不同的饭店吃饭, 一起去酒吧喝酒也去公园又玩又照相又照几张照片等.我的朋友还想去卡拉OK厅唱歌,(去唱k)this is more authentic and causal, but informal 但是为了因为我不喜欢唱歌,他跟我的同屋去了.那些天的天气是很好的,朋友告诉我大连没有广州那么热,很舒服.大连天气跟我们国家差不多一样,所以我也觉得还可以.
我的朋友回去以后我还有三天自由时间.那些天我努力地学习.每天复习教程课和口语课,听听力棵课的录音等.晚上的时候我看了一个(一部)中国电影.觉得不错,但是我常常听不懂,所以停电影,再看一次.听懂以后继续看.每天我看了大概30分钟,所以能三天看完.还有一个作业,老师让我们写一篇800字的作文.我觉得800字是有点儿多,一写句子,就数一数里边的字.
那个自由星期我好好儿休息也不错地准备考试,因为有一个自由的星期,我可以好好休息,并且准备考试, 所以我可以继续学习学得好.
希望你能够读这篇文章并帮我改正错误的地方,我会非常感谢你的!写得非常不错,偶尔有点错别字,还有一些连词的错误,但是不影响整体的表达。语言虽然有点生涩,但是已经可以完全表达出你想要表达的意思,这是一个了不起的成就!建议日后可以看一些中国青年作家的小说,比如韩寒,他们的作品比较随意,多数是描写生活,语言简单但是流畅,对你的学习会有很大帮助,加油!
0 votedMay 11, 20121- could u plz help me to improve these introduction, many thx As a large-scale holding company, China Greensta Company Limited is specialized in investment in new energy, and also(also,it was) was the first to go into (involve into) the research and development, production and sale of methanol fuel. Its total asset is RMB 2.127 billion. its annual output value is now over RMB 5 billion, (and expected)to be over RMB 23 billion in next two years. The company has invested in a number of methanol gasoline projects in Hubei, Jiangsu, Shanxi, Zhejiang and etc. The projects, (which were )completed or under construction, exceed 2.5 million tons. Through a decade of efforts, China Greensta has made remarkable achievement in the methanol gasoline industry for which(as) the best evidence is a trouble-free use of Greensta Huadun Brand methanol gasoline in 80 million vehicles. Moreover, the company is the sole supplier of methanol gasoline for Sinopec Group and Petro China. As a leader of domestic methanol gasoline, the people (staff)at Greensta are purposed to complete a production scale of 20 million tons during the 12th Five-Year period, making contributions to the undertaking of new energy and environmental protection in China.January 2, 201210
- what I've learnt today I have not been here for several days, i miss you guys very much, lol. last weekend, i took my IELTS exam, it was more complicated than i expected, and i was too nervous to tried my best, but i take it for granted that i can get a satisfactory score. today i read an article talking about the patterns of culture, to put it mildly, it was a complex article, not only for its structure that was full of out right complex sentence, but for the content of the passage was not straightforward. but i learn from this passage that no man ever looks at the world with pristine eyes. He sees it edited by a definite set of customs and institutions and ways of thinking, for from the moment of his birth, the customs into which he is born shape his experience and behaviour. by and large, i consider these statement stand to reasons.March 9, 201100
春夏秋冬你最喜歡哪個?
春天, 夏天, 秋天還<strike>是</strike>有冬天, 你最喜歡哪個季節?
我最喜歡秋天. 秋天不熱不冷, 但是虽然(“虽然”听起来更顺畅)季節<strike>的</strike>開始的<strike>有</strike>時候天氣很悶熱. 更重要是因为十月在秋<strike>天</strike>季, 而我的生日在十月!
我不喜歡英國的冬天, 天很早就黑了, 經常大風天氣刮大风(“大风天气”听起来有些别扭). 英國的冬天真冷, 但不常常下雪. 如果英國的冬天能多下点雪, 我就會喜歡! 我非常喜歡雪天.
春天很漂亮, 百花<strike>開始開了</strike><font color="#ff0000">齐放</font>(“百花齐放”是一个不错的成语,用在这里很合适,你可以去查查), 我們開始看到藍色的天空和燦爛的陽光, 但英國的春天好像天天都要下雨, 而且天氣還是很冷.
夏天不錯, 英國的夏天常常是<strike>青</strike>晴天, 有時候天氣非常熱, 但我不喜歡太熱的天氣, 當我在陽光下待<strike>花</strike>很長時間的时候,我就會頭痛. 有時候英國的夏天很乾燥, 但說真的,英國<strike>終年常常</strike>常年下雨!
告訴我, 哪個季節是你最喜歡的?0 votedMarch 6, 20110
