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Dear Alex,

I hope you’re well. I’m writing to tell you that I took part in a lottery and I got the main prize – two tickets to a concert – which I <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">desire</s> would like to to share with you.

This event will take place in a few months – at the 5th of March to be exact. The concert will be held in the Concert Hall here, in Moscow. There will be plenty of famous singers (Sia, Madonna and Lady Gaga among them) and this event will last about 5 hours.

I’m really happy that I won tickets for the show. And it was so easy! I just bought a couple of lottery tickets in the shop near my house several weeks ago. I didn’t <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">hope to</s> think I would win because <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">I'd</s> I've never won a thing, you know. However, when I opened the <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">site of lottery in the web</s> lottery website I realized that the winning number was written right on <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">the</s> one of my tickets!

When I got my tickets to the concert I had no hesitations about who I’d go with. I want to <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">visit</s> go to this event with you because I know that you’re fond of pop-singers. Also it was very funny to go to the previous concert with you.

Keep in touch,

Mariya.

The Significance of Seeds

Seeds are always the origin of life. Life comes into existence from seeds and nurtures itself from them within the first few hours.

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Please help check if <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">it</s> my writing corresponds to the <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">habit</s> norm of native speakers’ spoken English.

Almost everyone is celebrating Christmas, while <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">i</s> I am learning English alone.

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Now, <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">i</s> I am also preparing for some tests and interviews with some recruiters from some universities.

I hope <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">i</s> I <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">could</s> can get an offer from my ideal universities.

Pls check this <s>is</s> sentence )))

I think a study space is important for many people because it contributes to a more comfortable <s>passing of the learning</s> education experience.

Pumpkin for food

Today we will have pumpkin soup for lunch. It is simple. We added fish sauce, pepper, some other ingredients, cooked for half an hour and served. Pumpkins are cheap here. They are also nutritious and healthy. We can stir them with oil too, but I don't like that. I like pumpkins most when we cook them with coconut milk, sugar, milk, and green beans, then cool them down, add some ice, and serve. We call them Chè Bí Ngô. I like foods that are good for my health and contain a lot of vitamins. And Bí Ngô fits this description.

I am hungry and have to stop writing.

Thank you!