Bad Food

Yesterday was my auntie's birthday, and I really ate very much.
When I arrived, I didn't want to eat but I couldn't resist the temptation and I ate tequeños and doritos.
I'm on a diet, then so the situation was terrible. Later, I ate cake and hamburguer,
Today, I did a lot of exercise but I'm sad. I need to lose 4.5 kg.

 

This well written, its true you could have used other words but I really only wanted to change one word, keep up the good work

A balanced diet will be healthier than any additives

Introducing myself-artistic youth with an interest in economics. economic mind

I have learned English for more than 9 years since I attended primary school and already have the medium level in English level and a large vocabulary.However,Chinese English education attaches more attention to testing written English level rather than practical communication skills. As a result,the struture of my English ability isn't balanced. Relatively speaking, I'm good at English reading and writing, but my listening and speaking abilities are unfortunately, poor. As a Chinese student, I have little chance to communicate with native English speakers.So I want find one to help me improve my oral English.
I am a freshman at OUC(ocean university of China) which is located in China's coastal open city Qingdao. I major in cultural industry management and have great passion for learning foreign languages and cultures. In my eyes,language is a useful and basic tool for me to explore the incredible beauty of different cultures all over the world. All I want to do is to open my eyes to new worlds different from mine. I have a well-rounded knowledge of Chinese culture, so if you want to wanna come more closer to China, I will lead you to discover not only its mysterious ancient oriental glamour but also its rapidly developing modern culture.
I'm interested in realm of art and literature. I like listening to music(especially folk/funky/soft rock,) writing, reading, photography(lomo), playing the piano and guitar……But in the same time,I am also concerned about enterprise management、 business models.finance financial and banking ……in short,I am an artistic youth with an interest in economics.  economic mind.
I believe that my fate depends on the people I meet so let's make friends and make progresses together!

It means that the person " they " refers to likes to use words that are similar to "bamboozle"

It means there were many cables coming away from it, and they were as often happens, entwined or wound together, and a further comparison is made to the in and out shape of snakes across the space. I hope this helps.

First notebookentry: Introducing myself

Hi！I 'm a 20 -year-old gril girl who study studies in the  Centre Academy of Fine Arts,and my major is Humanity, it's my sophomore year, to study abroad is my dream(I want to go to Britain), in order to make it come ture true, I'm studying English very hard these days. so I really want to have a friend who speaks English very well, anative English speaker is better would be best.

How to be a Good Teacher Teaching Chinese to Foreigners

As is well-konwn, teaching is a duty for teachers and konwing knowing how to be a good teacher is necessary. What's more, it's also important for a student whose major is teaching Chinese as a second language to konw know that clearly. Moreover, how should we become a good teachers teaching Chinese to foeigners foreigners
According to my observing obsevations between  of Chinese teachers and foreign teachers, both of them  teaching a language begin with listening, speaking, reading and writing, then there is going to be a synthesize these are the similarities. The different difference is their teaching methods. In a Chinese class, teaching theory is mainly teacher-centered, paying attention to the impartation  imparting of konwledge knowledge, neglecting the sutudents students and their language creativity. Instead of teacher's lecturing, strengthening student's self-reading and self-exploration is common in a foreign class.
In my opinion, teaching method should be fitted to learning method during the process. If a school's goal is to educate all students, so they should try to realize their dreams, and we must find a way to disrupt the monolithic classroom and move toward a student-centred model. Specifically, we should let foreigners take an active part in your  class. Not noly only does the method adapt teachers to Chinese, but also to foreigners.

( if you read the compositions, please tell me whether the contents concurs with the topic, thanks for your help)