Correction Request 2

The reason I chose this book is that I’m interested in psychology. I chose this book because I am interested in psychology. Actually, this book was very interesting to me, because it gave me some topics to think about. After reading this, I had time to introspect. So far I’ve depended on System 1 too much. I've been too dependent on System 1. I usually don’t think critically. I behaved very impulsively and quickly. Also, I was very lazy, because I didn’t operate System 2. I was very impulsive and lazy because I didn't operate System 2. I just lived operating System 1.
Even when I think about my future occupation, I depended was dependent on System 1. I just listened to my professor, friends, and sister without thinking critically. If my professor recommended me to enter the human resources department, I would decide to enter the department. If my sister recommended me to enter the graduate school, I would plan to do that. If my friends said that entering graduate school is not that helpful to get a job, I decided not to enter the graduate school. I think the why I changed my plan too frequently is that because I didn’t operate my System 2.

Good job! :) Keep up the good work.

I will only suggest the following:

-Improve word choice. Make sure your verb tenses match up.

-Try to make your paragraph more linear. Try to transition your sentences in an orderly form, as if you were writing directions or a timeline. Explain what "System 1" or "System 2" is, so the reader knows what your talking about. As you mentioned, it is a psychology class. Expand on that subject.