my new year's aim
Today is Chinese new year.I am happy very much.I taked many photos with my families. A big family had dinner together.They were laughing at me fat. I was so angry.
so ,my new year's aim
1 ,lose my weight
2.improve my English
3.get a good major
Work hard!
February 2, 2011
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我的大学的早上
我今天在大学里帮新学生调节大学(生活)。不幸(的是)我的老师<strike>给我</strike>告诉了我<strike>不对的 </strike>错的时间<strike>不</strike>! 我<strike>一点晚来了</strike>晚些才到课堂,you can say 我迟到了,我没办法。我的老师也<strike>晚</strike>迟到了。有幸(的是)因为有足够时间所以我能回答他们的问题。(和)学生(一起)玩。(能)帮(助)别人,我很高兴。:)
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January 30, 2011
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--需要帮助--
谢谢所有更正。
我的语序是<strike>坏</strike>错的。you can say 我不会正确的语序。
我不知道正确的话。 我不会如何正确的说汉语。
我真的很需要帮助。