Unhappy.

I am in shenyang China now.Today is not very happy ,and I do not know why the reason, Maybe because maybe because of the weather is extraordinarily cold wether today. And I feel longly lonely, so I want to go home , to be with my mother, my father ang and  all my families. What's worse, I will take a test called CET4. I am puzzled, because I don't know how to prepare for it. I am scared that I can't pass it. I amhave been nervous for many days. My classmates all study hardlyhard, but I don't like to study. I am so lazy , and I always want to play games .The weather is so bad that I don't want to go outside . I think I am a lazier lazybones.

who can help my poor writing...

Requirement:it is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents,for instance for sport or music:and others are not.However,it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musicians.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion (You did not in the first paragraph.)
(give reasons for your answer and include any relevent examples from your own knowledge or experience.Write at least 250 words)

A sizable percentage of people indecate indicate that some people are born with certain talents,Nevertheless,towards the same issue,some people hold different view that any child can be taught to be talented people.

In traditional Chinese people's opinion,dating back to Confucius Time until now, it is generally agreed that children were born with kindness and talents.For instance,a boy called Zhong Yong, was a very talented boy during the Tang Dynasty, approximately 1000 years ago,he can write Chinese characters when he was only 2, and started creating poems since he was 5,which is almost impossible for other children at his age. Nonetheless,without proper further education after his renown spreading around,the talend fade away after his growing up.
Whereas,a large number of people assert that,children could also be taught to be an essential role in the society even though they were not born with certain talents.In the contemporary society,all the parental generic problem is what is the best way to educate their children is. to make them learn as much as possible Acounting Accounting for their commen common sense that children already have competitions since thery were children,...Meanwhile,we can judge from the majority of the celebrities in the world who were not only born talented but also well educated with certain abilities. (judge what?)For me ,I was am a normal child who was is not so much different from other kids,however,hard working on English study made me a good commend commander of another language.

Overall, both sides have their own advantages, but in my own opinion, children were not only born skilled ,but more importantly is become good afterwards education.