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Requirement:it is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents,for instance for sport or music:and others are not.However,it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musicians.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
(give reasons for your answer and include any relevent examples from your own knowledge or experience.Write at least 250 words)
A sizable percentage of people indecate that some people are born with certain talents,Nevertheless,towards the same issue,some people hold different view that any child can be taught to be talented people.
In traditional Chinese people's opinion,dating back to Confucius Time until now.it is generally agreed that children were born with kindness and talents.For instance,a boy called Zhong Yong was a very talented boy during the Tang Dynasty approximately 1000 years ago,he can write Chinese characters when he was only 2.And he started creating poems since he was 5,which is almost impossible for other children at his age. Nonetheless,without proper education,the talend fade away after his growing up.
Whereas,a large number of people assert that,children could also be taught to be an essential role in the society even though they were not born with certain talents.In the contemporary society,all the parental generic problem is what is the best way to educate their children to make them learn as much as possible Acounting for their commen sense that children already have competitions since thery were children.Meanwhile,we can judge from the majority of the celebrities in the world were not only born talented but also well educated with certain abilities. For me ,I was a normal child who was not so much different from other kids,however,hard working on English study made me a good commend of another language.
Overall, both sides have their own advantages ,but in my own opinion ,children were not only born skilled ,but more importantly is good afterwards education.
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who can help my poor writing...
Requirement:it is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents,for instance for sport or music:and others are not.However,it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musicians.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion (You did not in the first paragraph.)
(give reasons for your answer and include any relevent examples from your own knowledge or experience.Write at least 250 words)
A sizable percentage of people indecate indicate that some people are born with certain talents,Nevertheless,towards the same issue,some people hold different view that any child can be taught to be talented people.
In traditional Chinese people's opinion,dating back to Confucius Time until now, it is generally agreed that children were born with kindness and talents.For instance,a boy called Zhong Yong, was a very talented boy during the Tang Dynasty, approximately 1000 years ago,he can write Chinese characters when he was only 2, and started creating poems since he was 5,which is almost impossible for other children at his age. Nonetheless,without proper further education after his renown spreading around,the talend fade away after his growing up.
Whereas,a large number of people assert that,children could also be taught to be an essential role in the society even though they were not born with certain talents.In the contemporary society,all the parental generic problem is what is the best way to educate their children is. to make them learn as much as possible Acounting Accounting for their commen common sense that children already have competitions since thery were children,...Meanwhile,we can judge from the majority of the celebrities in the world who were not only born talented but also well educated with certain abilities. (judge what?)For me ,I was am a normal child who was is not so much different from other kids,however,hard working on English study made me a good commend commander of another language.
Overall, both sides have their own advantages, but in my own opinion, children were not only born skilled ,but more importantly is become good afterwards education.
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Uhmnnn...good afternoon,jie jie^^i've just read your notebook.You are right because some people were born with certain talent,but this is only a minority.So i always consider that"the lack of innate ability is not reason why someone can't become a genius;also not because of innate smart,the genius was always born to achieve excellence at once without education/experiences"...hihi(^.^)about this,my great mirror is the physicsist Newton-there were many meaningful lessons from his life.To have the lamps we're using nowaday,he had broken more than 8 thousands ones before he invented what using.And thus,we don't need to focus too much on which called innate smart or not-just be comfortable to live our best by our mind&heart!...Because one is only poor only if they choose to be...With me,the most valuable thing of life is happiness,even if they are only in the simplest things^__^
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