Personality

Each person is different <s>from each other</s>. Everyone has their own personality and therefore we can't be the same.

In fact, I hate<em> (hate is a very strong word. Maybe use I dislike, or I am irritated by instead!) </em><s>different</s> some people's negative traits like lying, egotism, and / or irresponsibility. I guess that the main reason <s>of</s> for these feelings is otherness in character, <em>(no plural s needed here, as you are talking about another person’s character) </em>worldview, upbringing or moral principles.

In some cases, even good traits can be <s>annoyed</s> annoying. For example, naivety, because If you appear <s>this trait</s> naive, people may / will take advantage of you <s>surely</s>.

The most <s>desired </s>desirable trait <em>(no plural s needed here, as you are only talking about one trait) </em>for me is patience. I consider that patient people are very wise. I am not a <s>keeping control</s> calm / controlled / composed person. So, maybe I want to have patience because it is my opposite trait.

I'm sure that we can change our personalities <em>(this one should be plural, because you said “we” and are talking about more than one person)</em>. There is a very suitable saying about it in English. He that dwells next door to a cripple will learn to halt. It means that other people influence <s>on</s> us and we <s>are changing</s> change because of them. One more good saying is written in the Bible. "Be not deceived: evil communications corrupt good manners." <s>Here</s> It is a very interesting point that we learn bad things or habits easier than good ones.

We can find <s>out</s> the same example in <s>the</s> nature. To grow a crop, farmers have to <s>make</s> do a great job spending a lot of time and power. On the other hand, weeds <em>(plural s needed here, as you’re talking about multiple weeds)</em> grow without somebody's help<s>ing</s>.

So, I think that people are able to change their personality, but it is <s>too</s> hard to become better.

<em>Great job overall! You explained some complicated subjects in these paragraphs. I’m impressed. </em>

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Good job!