Holiday birthday pary  Party

set up last thusday thursday to Tallinn,the daughter of my brother albulgh(Is it a number in Arabic ? )-year-old will become two years old when enring entering the monther of ramadan mubarak in vited me eilham is the mother of tallinn to a concert gala birthday(It's hard for me to understand your meaning in this sentence ) .her daughter and (and who ?)asked her about the time the concert,she siad said after evening prayers and agreed to go to the party came on thursday equipped with my self and my mother and went to the party and the guests were womes women and children only music,songs and another concert ahoudna holiday birthday me allexcept l’d went the unitl saw the comcerta bit’then went on kitchen with the maid bouktna not why did not cconne (what's this ?)us ido not like screamimg at me never i like and addressed the guests and you arvdt food and then ate and took some sweets and i went to the to the house(very hard for me to undertand ). the and end.

Well, my tips are :

1. Pay more attention to spelling;

2. Work harder on grammar.

Hope you would find it to be helpful for you . :)