correct my storie please

Once upon a time there was a girl who was <s>grown up</s> raised <s>for</s> by a rich family. Her father was alive and she adored him very much but still she lived with that rich family since her poor father couldn't give her all the things that she needed to live... After a while she <s>knew</s> discovered that the family were<s> growing her Up</s> raising her with the simple interest that the girl would be useful some day. One of the children of the rich family was <s>in</s> ill and the girl would be useful for an organ transplant for the child ... The girl was in love and she was pregnant <s>of</s> by her boyfriend. When she got pregnant she just couldn't do the organ transplant since she preferred to have her daughter before saving that other boy's life... The family who raised her were very upset with her and they decided to take revenge by taking away her daughter and giving her up for adoption to another family... This was very painful for her and she never knew what had happened with her daughter, She only knew that her daughter <s>has</s> had been taken from her and she decided to make them pay for all the damage they caused her. It was not easy. She went through many difficult things but <s>at</s> in the end she managed to make them pay and she recovered her daughter.

Anger volcano

Hi every one

Today I'm going to talk about temper and how to lose it. I would like to share my remedies with you. meanwhile I tend to talk about some people that can cheer me up . actually the only point of stating this issue is to improve writing. I will be pleased if you tell me my mistakes here.

-What makes me blow my top and get upset :

To tell you the truth , when I really need to sleep but <s>my environment noises</s> noises in my environment prevent me <s>to snooze</s> from snoozing, this is the prominent situation that I lose my nerve . When I get brushed off or someone is lying <s>me</s> to my face or things don't go according to plan are other cases that I feel on edge.

-How to deal with being a ticking time bomb or exploding :

To me , I would rather be left alone to take <s>edge</s> control of myself. Strolling could also be a good suggestion to clear my mind . Moreover, having a cold glass of water might help, although in some cases nothing can be a productive remedy unless you let time heal you .

-What really cheers me up :

As far as <s>I considered</s> I'm concerned having <s>a</s> great company as a <s>sportive</s> supportive listener is really significant <s>to me</s>. [You don't necessarily have to take out "to me." I just think it sounds better without it because you already said "as far as I'm concerned."] Particularly when we are exposed to final straw . [I would change this sentence, I just can't think of how I would say it.] Last but not least, watching "Friends" constantly works for me to stop rehashing unpleasant events .

Questions :

-What is your remedy to stop being nervous or on edge ?

-How do you cheer your friend up when they feel down in the dumps?

-what do you think we should do to boost our patience ?

-have you ever told others about your soft spot?

-does it work to tell everyone about <s>reasons</s> things that can torture us ?

-has it ever happened that others take advantage of those points and make you angry easily ?

-What makes you choked with rage ?

smile please

Hi everyone. You will make me so happy if you correct my text. Thank you in advance .

There is an ancient narrative or anecdote according to some cultures which <s>is said</s> says, "Grinning or smirking <em style="color: rgb(255, 153, 0);">[see explanation below]</em> or smiling can reduce <s>the</s> pain." Nowadays this point is proven by science. It is able to boost and improve our immune system and <s>diminish</s> reduce blood pressure and stress <em style="color: rgb(255, 153, 0);">["diminish" has a similar meaning, but "reduce" sounds more natural in this sentence]</em><em>.</em> Although Iranians do not laugh enough nowadays like people in other countries owing to the coronavirus outbreak, in my point of view some people are transparent, open with their emotions, easy going, <s>and</s> optimistic and tend to smile. They know how to normalize it in their environment, considering that smiling can be contagious to some extent .

To sum up I guess the most beautiful kind of makeup is smiling deep down. But not a fake smile because that is totally detectable. When I was younger I <s>have</s> always wanted to have an impressive smile. <em style="color: rgb(255, 153, 0);">[The way it is written in my correction it means that you wanted an impressive smile when you were younger but you don't necessarily want one now. You could also say, "Since I was young I have always wanted to have an impressive smile." This would imply that you wanted an impressive smile when you were young and you still want an impressive smile now.]</em> <s>besides</s> I even practiced in front of a mirror. Now I think it was funny because the best way to affect others is to be yourself and love the way you are and smile. Your smile quite belongs to you.

One last thing, Matthew Perry's smile is the most fantastic picture of smirking that I've ever seen in my life. <em style="color: rgb(255, 153, 0);">[The word "smirk" has a negative connotation. It's like an arrogant smile. If you want it to be positive you might say something like, "Matthew Perry has the most fantastic smile I've ever seen in my life."]</em>

By living with Bover's things all around him, Ben was preventing "psychological scabs" from forming over his emotional wounds.