smile please
Hi everyone .you will make me so happ if you correct my text . thank you in advance .
There is ancient narrative or anecdote according to some cultures which is said " grinning or smirking or smiling can reduce the pain" . nowadays this point is proved by Scientifics. it is able to boost and improve our immune system and diminish blood pressure and stress . although Iranian do not laugh enough nowadays like other countries owing to coronavirus outbreak. in my point of view some people are transparent , open with their emotion , easy going and optimistic tend to smile . they know how to normalize it in their envairment , considering that smiling can be contagious to some extent .
To sum up I guess the most beautiful kind of make up is smiling deep down. but not fake smile because that is totally detectable . when I was younger i have always wanted to have impressive smile besides I practiced in front of mirror . now I think it was funny because the best way to affect others is to be yourself and love the way you are and smile . your smile quite belongs to you .
One last thing , Matthew Perry's smile is the fantastic picture of smirking that I've ever seen in my life
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smile please
Hi everyone. You will make me so happy if you correct my text. Thank you in advance .
There is an ancient narrative or anecdote according to some cultures which is said says, "Grinning or smirking [see explanation below] or smiling can reduce the pain." Nowadays this point is proven by science. It is able to boost and improve our immune system and diminish reduce blood pressure and stress ["diminish" has a similar meaning, but "reduce" sounds more natural in this sentence]. Although Iranians do not laugh enough nowadays like people in other countries owing to the coronavirus outbreak, in my point of view some people are transparent, open with their emotions, easy going, and optimistic and tend to smile. They know how to normalize it in their environment, considering that smiling can be contagious to some extent .
To sum up I guess the most beautiful kind of makeup is smiling deep down. But not a fake smile because that is totally detectable. When I was younger I have always wanted to have an impressive smile. [The way it is written in my correction it means that you wanted an impressive smile when you were younger but you don't necessarily want one now. You could also say, "Since I was young I have always wanted to have an impressive smile." This would imply that you wanted an impressive smile when you were young and you still want an impressive smile now.] besides I even practiced in front of a mirror. Now I think it was funny because the best way to affect others is to be yourself and love the way you are and smile. Your smile quite belongs to you.
One last thing, Matthew Perry's smile is the most fantastic picture of smirking that I've ever seen in my life. [The word "smirk" has a negative connotation. It's like an arrogant smile. If you want it to be positive you might say something like, "Matthew Perry has the most fantastic smile I've ever seen in my life."]
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