My first conversation

Some new events happened in the last <strike>some </strike>few days. <strike>In first </strike>Firstly, I watched an English film <strike>in English</strike>. It was a new experience. To be honestl<strike>y</strike>, if I hadn’t <strike>used</strike>  look at the subtitles I would<strike>n’t </strike>have understood <strike>not much </strike>a little. It’s very interesting to watch an old well known film in English. You can <strike>hear</strike>  feel the new emotions and <strike>real</strike>  the actual voice <strike>of</strike> from the characters.<strike> I think </strike>I’ll continue <strike>it</strike> to watch English firm. And I hope I’ll <strike>de </strike>be able <strike>soon</strike> to watch English films even without subtitles soon.
<strike>In s</strike>Secondly, I spoke with my English-speaking friend <strike>at last</strike>. Unfortunately <strike>It</strike> My English wasn’t as fluentl<strike>y</strike> as I thought. When I <strike>said </strike>speak to myself it was very simple, clear and fluentl<strike>y</strike>. :) But in reality a lot of things <strike>prevent you </strike>would affect you. I was uppset that I couldn't speak clear<strike> </strike><strike>my speaking wouldn’t be </strike>enough <strike>clearly</strike>. And I<strike> would be</strike> was like an alien from a far planet: “Hi people! I’ve come with peace!” :) There was only one small problem: the terrible quality of a connection. But it doesn’t m<strike>e</strike>atter because I spoke English!!!


Great job.  Please pay more attention to article (a, an, the).  Also when you use the word "it", make sure the reader understand clearly what the "it" is referring to.  For example, in the sentence of "I spoke with my english speaking friend.  Unfortunately it wasn't as fluently", the reference of "it" is confusing.