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My first conversation Some new events happened in last some days. In first, I watched a film in English. It was a new experience. To be honestly, if I hadn’t used subtitles I wouldn’t have understood not much. It’s very interesting to watch old well known film in English. You can hear new emotions and real voice of characters. I think I’ll continue it. And I hope I’ll de able soon watch English films even without subtitles. In second, I spoke with my English-speaking friend at last. Unfortunately It wasn’t as fluently as I thought. When I said to myself it was very simple, clear and fluently. :) But in reality a lot of things prevent you. I was uppset that my speaking wouldn’t be enough clearly. And I would be like an alien from a far planet: “Hi people! I’ve come with peace!” :) There was only one small problem: the terrible quality of a connection. But it doesn’t metter because I spoke English!!!

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Hi Aleksey! In your profile you say you are programmer. I read several your articles; if you hadn't posted your profession, I would have said you are a writer. The way of telling is breathtaking even when you tell about work days. I'm not good in English and can't correct your articles, I just wanted to tell you that you could be a a good writter =)
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My first conversation

Some new events happened in last few days. Firstly, I watched a film in English, it was a new experience. To be honest, if I hadn’t used subtitles I wouldn’t have understood much. It’s very interesting to watch an old well known film in English. You can hear new emotions and the characters real voice. I think I’ll continue to watch films in english. And, I hope I’ll soon be able to watch English films without the subtitles.
Secondly, I finaly spoke with my english-speaking friend. Unfortunately, I wasn’t as fluent as I thought. When I said words to myself, they were  very simple, clear, and fluent. :) But in reality, a lot of things I said were not. I was upset that my speaking wasnt clear enough. I was like an alien from a far planet: “Hi people! I come in peace!” :) 
I had one small problem, and that was the terrible quality of a connection. But, it doesn’t matter because I spoke English!!!
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My first conversation

Some new events happened in the last some few days. In first Firstly, I watched an English film in English. It was a new experience. To be honestly, if I hadn’t used  look at the subtitles I wouldn’t have understood not much a little. It’s very interesting to watch an old well known film in English. You can hear  feel the new emotions and real  the actual voice of from the characters. I think I’ll continue it to watch English firm. And I hope I’ll de be able soon to watch English films even without subtitles soon.
In sSecondly, I spoke with my English-speaking friend at last. Unfortunately It My English wasn’t as fluently as I thought. When I said speak to myself it was very simple, clear and fluently. :) But in reality a lot of things prevent you would affect you. I was uppset that I couldn't speak clear my speaking wouldn’t be enough clearly. And I would be was like an alien from a far planet: “Hi people! I’ve come with peace!” :) There was only one small problem: the terrible quality of a connection. But it doesn’t meatter because I spoke English!!!


Great job.  Please pay more attention to article (a, an, the).  Also when you use the word "it", make sure the reader understand clearly what the "it" is referring to.  For example, in the sentence of "I spoke with my english speaking friend.  Unfortunately it wasn't as fluently", the reference of "it" is confusing.

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