My husband

⚫︎He lived in the United States for about five years.

⚫︎Before marriage, we had traveled to the United States together.

⚫︎I want to visit the city where he lived someday with the whole family.

⚫︎I have not been able to travel abroad since my child was born.

Very good! Thank you sharing. I just made one small correction. In the second sentence, we should use had instead of have. This is in the past perfect tense instead of the present perfect tense.

Is this ok?

If we read old travel stories about Bogotá, we would see the fascination that was produced by traditional markets. As Issac Holton told us<s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">,</s> in his book <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">new grenade</s> <em>New Granada: Twenty </em><em style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">M</em><em>onths in the Andes</em> published in 1857, it was possible to see the flux of people from the countryside going downtown and “the streets became a river in which honey, panela [typical food from Colombia], sugar, fruits and one thousand things flow”. In 1882, Rosa Carnegie William (1990) also was surprised by the way in which indig<s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">u</s>enous people, without shoes and carrying their babies in the back, brought food to Bogota.

Very interesting! I should study a bit more about Bogotá. I made a few small corrections, but this was a very good paragraph!

Are these sentences correct please?

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Do you know that the Chinese believe in five basic elements, unlike the Greeks?

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I just made some small corrections in the second sentence. I hope they help!

REPORT ON MY STUDYING EXPERIENCE

Introduction

The aim of this report is to outline why it’s important to take part in a studying experience and to make recommendations for improvements.

Reasons for doing the studying experience

I have worked in an international company in the United Kingdom for a month as <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">a</s> part of a work experience programme. I must say that the programme has generally been well organized.

During this month, I had the opportunity to learn a lot about office work and since I’m attending a management school, this experience has been crucial for my school career.

Positive and negative aspects

This studying experience has had a lot of positive elements. This experience has been very interesting because I’ve learned a lot of new things and have improved my English.

For young people it’s a great chance to open their mind and to discover new cultures and languages and to make new friends.

The staff was very friendly and I made a lot of friends.

But I think that some of the students should have gotten more help with English because not everyone has the same competence.

Recommendations

It would be a good idea to create smaller groups to have the time to learn better and listen to everyone. In addition, the programme's activities should be advertised more widely and the price should be a little lower.

Very good! I enjoyed reading about your studying experience. I think it is great that you took the time to think about some improvements. I made some small corrections. I would recommend being careful with your perfect and perfect continuous tenses. I was a bit confused while reading your writing whether you were still working on the programme or if you had just finished the programme.

Thank you for sharing!

The party

Last Saturday, Jordan went to a party with your two best friends, Veronika and Alice. The party was very fun, and there were a lot of people that he didn't know. Jordan is very extroverted and likes to dance.

He invited a beautiful girl to dance, but she refused. He tried with another girl, and he had success.

They danced all night long, but your friends got jealous.

When the party was over, he left alone.

Interesting story! I made some small corrections. I hope they help!

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<em style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">The Walking Dead</em> is an American apocalyptic horror television series on AMC based on a comic.

The series is set in an apocalyptic world and stars Rick Grimes (Andrew Lincoln).

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When he arrives in the city, he meets a group of zombies. Afterwards, he takes refuge in a war tank.

He meets a group of survivors, and he finally finds his family. He then becomes the leader of the group.

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I hope this helps! I have never watched <em>The Walking Dead</em> but it sounds interesting!