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    Theme park trip

    The last time I went to a theme park, <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">was when </s>I was ten/twelve years old. It was a trip with a few friends and an instructor.

    I remember the ticket booth was full and we had to wait <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">an</s> on a huge <s>queue</s> line, so we started complaining about it in a childish manner. The ride <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">part</s> happened to be amazing. We were scattered among the park and tried every attraction we could, and it was fun to see someone <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">of</s> from your group in the distance. It was a water park and <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">I’ve always been</s> was with a group composed of 4-5 boys. We had a lot of fun together and we came out of <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">that</s> it drenched.

    I remember we had a little trouble eating because it’s important to wait 2-3 hours after swimming <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">for doing a bath after</s>, but <s>apart</s> aside from that, everything else was really fun.


    <em>Ciao Andrea!</em>
    <em>Great work, your English is excellent!</em>
    <em>The corrections I made were quite minimal, you only have to work on is learning how to use the language in the way someone fluent would speak. (Grammatical)</em>
    <em>The edits I made in blue are suggestions on how to sound fluent. It's the way someone fluent (like myself), would say the same thing you said, but in another way which would sound better and be more commonly used.</em>
    <em>English is a confusing language, so congrats on speaking it so well!</em>
    <em>Sono Jenny, ho 17 anni, e sono di New York.</em>
    <em>Non parlo italiano bene però amo la lingua, la cultura, il cibo, e il mio ragazzo italiano moltissimo e queste sono le cause per cui voglio impararlo.</em>
    <em>Piacere di conoscerti!</em>
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    An essay

    Could someone correct this writing, please?
    Thank you very much

    People have different opinions about where it is better to live. Some people think that a big city is a better place to live <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">in</s>, while others think that a village is a good place too.

    On <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">the</s> one hand, urban life has various advantages in contrast to rural life. It offers numerous facilities and opportunities. For instance, to get a job and to set up a company in <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">the</s> cities is easier than in <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">the</s> villages. Moreover, young people who live in a city have more opportunities to study at a university and consequently, they have more opportunities to <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">have</s> build an important career. Also, people who live in <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">the</s> cities can find many forms of entertainment<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">s</s>, <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">like</s> such as amusement parks, museums, <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">or</s> and cinemas, <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">so that they have many opportunities for social life.</s> allowing them to have a diverse social life.

    On the other hand, living in a big city can be very stressful as the lifestyle is very busy<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">,</s>. There are industries and <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">then</s> pollution which is very harmful to the health of not only residents, but also the city's visitors. <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">While</s> People who live in a village have <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">more</s> a greater life expectancy than those who live in an urban area because of the fresh air and healthier food <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">and they suffer less stress and anxiety</s> while suffering less stress and anxiety.

    In short, we can conclude that living in <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">any</s> either <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">part</s> setting has both its advantages and disadvantages<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">,</s>;it <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">will</s> purely depends on your lifestyle.


    <em>Buen trabajo, Isabel</em><em>! (Your English is great. I'm Jenny Wu, an American girl, and I was born and raised in New York.)</em>
    <em>Su inglés es muy bueno, ¿por qué su perfil dice diferente? Aprendí algo de español en la escuela jaja. </em>
    <em>Pienso que necesitas trabajar más solo "lengua más suave".</em>
    <em>Overall, your English is great especially for a beginner. The only thing I would say you need to work on is expressing your sentences in a smoother, cohesive way because speaking too formally can make you sound robotic and not fluent - but of course, you are not fluent yet, so this is not a major concern for you.</em>
    <em>Just keep working on your English language skills, then work on what I said (smoother language) after!</em>
    <em>You can reach out to me if you ever need any help.</em>
    <em>-Jenny Wu</em>
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