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Hsu Jiayun
Chinese (Mandarin)
Feb 7, 2020
我們可以用中文聊的事情越來越多了! (Things we can chat about in Chinese are getting more and more!)
Hsu Jiayun
Chinese (Mandarin)
Dec 27, 2019
新年快樂!你的中文進步得很快。加油!
Fangfang (Yiela)
Chinese (Mandarin)
Oct 28, 2019
Kody的de功課gōngkè 很好hěnhǎo! 說shuō中文zhōngwén (Chinese (language))也yě很好 hěnhǎo :D 功課 gōngkè是shì 寫xiě (to write)一個 yíge對話duìhuà (dialogue)。 :)
Fangfang (Yiela)
Chinese (Mandarin)
Oct 14, 2019
你Nǐ今天jīntiān today很棒hěnbàng great! :D 很好hěnhǎo very good!
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  • Corrected
    I Forgot to Send My Child to the Nanny
    (This is fine, but "I Forgot to Drop My Child Off at the Nanny's House" sounds more natural to me. I don't think "Send" is the best word choice here since you drove him there yourself. Also, depending on what "the Nanny" is, it might be better to say "I Forgot to Drop My Child Off at Daycare")

    When I wake up in the morning, I <s>complete</s> do what I have to do without even thinking, including <s>changing clothes, putting on socks </s> getting dressed, finding my backpack, and grabbing my breakfast. My wife gives me our toddler and I settle him into his safety seat (I usually hear this referred to as a "booster seat") before starting the engine and setting off for work. Every weekday morning passes just like this.

    Everything was going as usual this morning. However, when I was approaching the nanny’s, my eyes suddenly glazed over even though I was still looking ahead <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">at the front</s> (I would delete this). My mind turned blank, and I kept driving like I was in a parallel universe. My toddler’s moaning ("moaning" makes it sound like he was upset or hurt. If we was happy you might say "babbling" or "cooing") brought me back (or "snapped me out of it") five minutes after I had driven past the nanny’s. An illegal U-turn at a traffic light sent me back<s> there</s>, and I dropped him off. I was late for work today.
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    July 17, 2020
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  • Posted
    我睡覺睡得太多 昨天因為我下班後午睡了,所以到二點為止不能睡著了。我今天下班後午睡再了,所以不能睡覺。我不想明天犯這個錯誤。我很開心明天是禮拜五因為我可以全週末睡覺!也許我睡覺睡得太多。如果我下班後沒午睡,也許我每個天十點睡覺。我希望下個禮拜比這個禮拜好。我將要更負責。
    June 19, 2020
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    2020年6月17日 我有時候在Netflix上跟我女朋友看韓國電視劇。最近我們看電視劇叫“Romance is a Bonus Book.” 在這個電視劇上有一個很漂亮的女生愛上有錢的。在每個我們看的電視劇有女生愛上有錢的。在這個上有錢的是教授,有名的作者,編輯。他很忙,可是還有時間愛上。怎麼還有時間,我不知道!這個人太猛了。我看這些韓國電視劇的時候覺得不太厲害!
    June 18, 2020
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  • Corrected
    Would you like to help me modify these sentences?

    “Anyone with any intelligence should be able to tell immediately if a story is fake.“

    I don’t agree with this<s> idea</s>. There are <s>some </s>many news stories <s>that</s> where we can’t immediately <s>find which</s> tell if they are true <s>events and which are</s> or fake<s> news.</s>, especially stories about something or somebody <s>which</s> we are not interested in or are beyond our knowledge<s>,</s>. For these <s>news</s> stories, we can’t <s>have</s> make a judgment in a short period of time. Meanwhile, it is a misconception that we (should?) immediately <s>define</s> (believe?) <s>some</s> the news when we don't know the whole picture. <s>In this way</s> If we do, we will be misled by the unscrupulous media and even cause unnecessary harm. For example, <s>there was </s>one time <s>a new that </s>the husband of a female doctor pushed a little boy into <s>the</s> a swimming pool, and it was caught on a <s>from </s>security camera. The<s>n this</s> video was uploaded <s>on</s> to the Internet<s>.</s>, and the female doctor’s family<s>ies</s> <s>were</s> was seriously attacked by many <s>the </s>netizens. Some people even went to the hospital to physically attack <s>this</s> the female doctor. In the end, the female doctor <s>can’t</s> couldn't stand it and <s>then she </s>committed suicide. A few days later, <s>a</s> the full video was released. It revealed that <s>in fact </s>the female doctor <s>has been</s> was sexually harassed by the boy in the swimming pool. The female doctor’s husband pushed the boy as a warning<s> for him</s>, but the video was maliciously edited, and <s>then </s>the facts changed dramatically. The whole incident is shocking, sad and regretful. It also tells us that <s>If </s>we cannot judge the truth of the news immediately<s>,</s>. We should not be <s>used</s> manipulated by nefarious people and the media. Don’t be mindless when it comes to the <s>for </s>news.

    Are you sure it was a "little boy" and not someone older like a teenager? "Little boy" makes it sound like he was very young (maybe 10 years old).

    Also, I agree! It's important to think critically when reading the news, and avoid spreading misleading or fake news stories.
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    June 18, 2020
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  • Corrected
    Buckling up and Maintaining Social Distancing

    When I was listening to the radio, a conversation put a smile on my face: Restaurant owners hope the government can relax the regulations on the prevention of COVID-19, especially <s>about</s> the two-meter social distancing rule, since there haven't been any cases in more than two months. "Do you need to buckle up," an expert explained, "when there <s>are</s> have been no fatalities in car accidents for two months?"

    The comparison is questionable <s>arguable</s>: When an accident happens, one can feel the effect of a seat belt right away; however, when social distancing saves one from being in contact with the virus, he may not even realize it. <s>if he catches the virus, he is unaware of when he is in contact with a case</s>. Besides, he only needs to wear a seat belt when he's driving, but is required to practice social distancing all day long.

    <em>i think what you are saying in the second paragraph is that when a seatbelt saves your life, it is very obvious. You can feel and see it working in a car crash. When social distancing saves your life, it is less obvious because you can't directly see or feel when it works.</em>
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    June 17, 2020
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    2020 年,6 月,16 日 我在家一個人工作,所以有的次感到無聊。我不能跟我同事聊聊,所以今天跟我的狗聊了。我知道它不會懂我說什麼,可是我跟它還說話。在我說話的時候它一心一意眈我。它聆聽聽得很好。我希望在二樓住的人沒聽我。
    June 17, 2020
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    2020 年,6 月14 日 我女朋友在開業公司。公司是在網路裡的心理診所。她沒開業過公司,所以有點壓力。我上一禮拜幫她做了網站,太難了!我們在做了那個網站很多小時。我們捉完的時候,我覺得那個很好看。我希望她吸引很多客戶。以後也許我可也退休了哈哈!
    June 16, 2020
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  • Corrected
    Hey! We use something similar to "Disagree and Commit" at my workplace. Sometimes it's hard to commit to something you don't agree with, but I do think it helps things get done faster.

    -Kody

    Disagree and Commit

    Disagree and Commit
    One purpose of meetings is to bring staff together and settle disagreements;<s>. </s> however, because it’s time consuming to resolve them, a new strategy called "Disagree and Commit" is being used <s>becomes a newer principle of meetings</s>. If one has opinions, he talks about them and lets other people hear them. After everyone expresses <s>his</s> their ideas, <s>one</s> a decision is made and the employees <s>start </s>commit<s>ting</s> commit to it.

    Can this principle be put into effect easily? Morale <s>sags</s> drops when toxic and unsatisfied employees are present<s>.</s> , but after <s>joining a</s> these meetings, <s>all of them</s> they turn into highly-efficient robots and engage in executing their outcomes <s>its conclusion</s>. Somehow, that’s just amazing.

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    One purpose of meetings is to bring staff together and settle disagreements; however, because it’s time consuming to resolve them, a new strategy called "Disagree and Commit" is being used. If one has opinions, he shares them and lets other people hear them. After everyone expresses their ideas, a decision is made and the employees commit to it.

    Can this principle be put into effect easily? Morale drops when toxic and unsatisfied employees are present, but after these meetings, they turn into highly-efficient robots and engage in executing their outcomes. Somehow, that’s just amazing.
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    June 15, 2020
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  • Posted
    2020 年,6 月,13 日 我今天找出想跟我說中文的人。她在學英文,所以我們也說英文了。我跟不是老師的人沒說過中文, 所以有點緊張。我們說了英文十五分鐘,十五分鐘說了中文。她說英文說得很好!我們聊聊我們的家人們,為什麼她學英文,她的新工作。她在跟她家人住紐約兩年半。做中文我們聊聊我女朋友,我住的地方。
    June 15, 2020
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  • Corrected
    Internet shopping will lead to the death of city centers.

    I don’t think so. There are three <s>factors</s> aspects of online stores that are not as good as physical stores. Firstly, the timeliness of physical stores is better than online shops. You can use the product <s>directly</s> immediately after buying it in a physical store<s>, and you could feel the great</s> which is very satisfying<s>action</s>. <s>We</s> You don’t need to wait for the <s>express</s> mail <s>and don’t</s> or worry about <s>the </s>returning the item. <s>The second one</s> Secondly, is the objectivity.<s>,</s> Product advertisements online <s>is</s><s> are</s> not objective and will affect your judgment. <s>People</s> You can’t touch the products when <s>they </s>shopping online.<s>,</s> <s>what they</s> Instead, you see <s>are all the</s> exaggerated advertisements <s>which are exaggerated by</s> from the merchant. Moreover, it is best to try on things like <s>the goods such as</s> clothes<s>ing</s> before buying, which can save you a lot of time and money. Thirdly, is the social aspect. <s>sociality,</s> You can <s>buy </s>go shopping with your friends in the city center which is a good way to bond with them <s>maintain the friendship</s>, and there are many fun places in the city center<s>,</s> so you can have a good time <s>could have a nice day in there</s>. In <s>the</s> a physical store <s>we</s> you <s>could</s> can enjoy the <s>targeted</s> personalized service<s>s</s> from the shop assistants, and <s>the advices from them are</s> their advice is more helpful than <s>the </s>online customer service. Of course, with the development of technology, all of us can’t guarantee that these advantages of physical stores <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 102);">will</s> won't be replaced by the online stores, but it may spend a long time to fulfill this wish.

    The highlighted section I would restructure to something like this so it's easier to follow:

    Of course, with the future development of technology, solutions for these disadvantages could be created by online merchants, though it may take a long time.
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    June 14, 2020
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