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“Anyone with any intelligence should be able to tell immediately if a story is fake“
I don’t agree with this idea. There are some many news that we can’t immediately find which are true events and which are fake news. Especially something or somebody which we are not interested or beyond our knowledge, for these news we can’t have a judgment in a short period of time. Meanwhile it is a misconception that we immediately define some news when we don't know the whole picture. In this way we will be led by the unscrupulous media and even cause unnecessary harm. For example, there was once a new that the husband of a female doctor pushed a little boy in the swimming pool from security camera. Then this video was uploaded on the Internet. The female doctor’s families were seriously attacked by the netizen. Some people even went to the hospital to attack this female doctor. In the end, the female doctor can’t stand it and then she committed suicide. A few days later, a full video was released. It revealed that in fact the female doctor has been sexually harassed by the boy in the swimming pool. The female doctor’s husband pushed the boy as a warning for him, but the video was maliciously edited, and then the facts changed dramatically. The whole incident is shocking, sad and regretful. It also tells us that If we cannot judge the truth of the news immediately, we should not be used by nefarious people and media. Don’t be mindless for news.
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Would you like to help me modify these sentences?
“Anyone with any intelligence should be able to tell immediately if a story is fake.“
I don’t agree with this idea. There are some many news stories that where we can’t immediately find which tell if they are true events and which are or fake news., especially stories about something or somebody which we are not interested in or are beyond our knowledge,. For these news stories, we can’t have make a judgment in a short period of time. Meanwhile, it is a misconception that we (should?) immediately define (believe?) some the news when we don't know the whole picture. In this way If we do, we will be misled by the unscrupulous media and even cause unnecessary harm. For example, there was one time a new that the husband of a female doctor pushed a little boy into the a swimming pool, and it was caught on a from security camera. Then this video was uploaded on to the Internet., and the female doctor’s familyies were was seriously attacked by many the netizens. Some people even went to the hospital to physically attack this the female doctor. In the end, the female doctor can’t couldn't stand it and then she committed suicide. A few days later, a the full video was released. It revealed that in fact the female doctor has been was sexually harassed by the boy in the swimming pool. The female doctor’s husband pushed the boy as a warning for him, but the video was maliciously edited, and then the facts changed dramatically. The whole incident is shocking, sad and regretful. It also tells us that If we cannot judge the truth of the news immediately,. We should not be used manipulated by nefarious people and the media. Don’t be mindless when it comes to the for news.
Are you sure it was a "little boy" and not someone older like a teenager? "Little boy" makes it sound like he was very young (maybe 10 years old).
Also, I agree! It's important to think critically when reading the news, and avoid spreading misleading or fake news stories.
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Would you like to help me modify the sentences
“Anyone with any intelligence should be able to tell immediately if a story is fake“
I don’t agree with this idea. There are some many is so much news that we can’t immediately find determine which events are true events and which are fake news. Especially when it's something or somebody which that we are not interested in or beyond/outside of our knowledge. For these this type of news we can’t have make a judgment in a short period of time. Meanwhile, it is a misconception that we immediately define (? another word?) some news when we don't know understand the whole picture. In this way, we will be misled by the unscrupulous media and which could even cause unnecessary harm. For example, there was once a news story that the husband of a female doctor pushed a little boy into the swimming pool as captured/recorded by the from security camera. This video was uploaded onto the Internet. The female doctor’s families were seriously attacked by the netizen. Some people even went to the hospital to attack this female doctor. In the end, the female doctor can’t couldn't stand it and then she committed suicide. A few days later, a the full video was released. It revealed that in fact, the female doctor had been sexually harassed by the boy in the swimming pool and the female doctor’s husband pushed the boy as a warning to him, However, the video had been maliciously edited, and then the facts changed dramatically. The whole incident is shocking, sad and regretful. It also tells shows us that If we cannot determine the legitimacy judge the truth of the news immediately and we should not be used manipulated/influenced by nefarious people and media. Don’t be mindless/gullible for news.
Interesting rationale for your ideas 杨月儿. Nicely done!
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