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With my doctorate experience, this is my sixth year of research and teaching, I created a digital public space and realized(carried out) various qualitative observations in an original way. (The/My) Results continue to be published in international peers to peers reviews. (or you could say..I continue to publish the results in international peers to peers reviews.
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I want to enhance reflexivity(<- I am unsure about this usage) of practicioners of digital writing (hypertext, collaborative, multimedia...). This goal can contribute to reduce the digital divide, or stimulate creativity of advanced users.
----Some options on the last sentence.
1. This goal can contribute to the reduction if the digital divide and stimulate the creativity of advanced users.
2. This goal can reduce the digital divide as well as stimulate the creativity of advanced users.
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Information literacy, digital creativity, information and communication sciences.0 votedDecember 1, 20100How to teach writing on social networks with digital artworks ?
Read(reading) and write (writing) on social networks is really different that (than) with traditionnal paper and pencil. With this new support(ability/feature/function), traces are analyzed by servers and we manage a digital identity, etc. Limits between private and public spheres are complex, various, and difficult to understand. However, individuals and organizations have to learn, if possible and as soon as possible, how to manage their digital traces to respect privacy and how to communicate in a network in order to avoid dangerous errors.(<- Sorry I changed this sentence quite a bit). How can we teach writing with digital traces? A frequently (used) advanced solution consist (of teaching) to teach every specific services and build curriculums relatively(relative) to every generic tool. However, many services evolve rapidly and can be used in different ways. To transfer durable competencies (<--I'm not sure what this is), we have to explore specific properties of digital writing like discretion or manipulation. We suggest that controling interfaces depends of(on) meta-writing competencies. In this communication we'll present our theory of digital properties. (Secondly), we'll present results of an experience(experiment) lead with(by) high school studentsl. The aim of this experience(experiment) is to inforce (enforce/encourage) the reflexivity(<- I'm not sure about this word) of learners by teaching meta-scriptural competencies and illustrating them with digital artworks. For future works, we hope to diffuse(expand) this approach in order to reduce the digital divide, not only by increasing the accessing to technologies, but also by the development of information literacy.
All in all this was pretty well done. I put the changes I would make in () and I added some conjuctions. I don't know what the digital traces are refering to though. Most of the problems are with word order and with prepositions. I can explain further if you have some specific questions.0 votedDecember 1, 20100Rest in peace Andy
Andy Irons was bigger than the waves. he cut the waves over and over like a hurricane and his aerial tha became a reference fot (for) me and all of the surfers around the world. He did´nt (didn't) fit on the waves, he din´t (didn't) fit in himself. Andy was a Giant. but (you) lost your final battle in a amazing way and ironic above all. victim (of) a disease transmitted by a fragile mosquito. At 32 years old, Andy leaves the scene, but leaves a legacy that will stay on history forever(that will live forever).
Rest in Peace, Andy
*in a photo, andy surfing in my hood, (he) was a honor and a (an) inspiration...
Umas coisas:
As coisas que eu cambiaria entre ()
In words with contractions like didn't the ' replaces the letter that is dropped
por exemplo
did not - didn't
could not - couldn't
Andy was a Giant. but lost your final battle in a amazing way and ironic above all. victim a disease transmitted by a fragile mosquito
Andy was a giant, but he lost his final battle in an unbelievable and above all ironic way, victim of a disease.....
É uma sentença muita muita complicada.
Não sei muito sobre o surfing mas vi a historia da sua morte nas noticias. É um pouco mais irónico porque eu morro na cidade de Dallas e acho que procurou sue corpo perto de Dallas né?
Robert
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