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Hi！I'm a 14-year-old girl from China and my English name is Cheryl . I want to improve my English so I need a foreign friend. Please help me , and I’d like to help you improve your Chinese as well.
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            我年轻的时候，很喜欢学外语<strike>。</strike>， 在大学学过法文， 德文， 俄文<strike>，</strike>和西班牙<strike>话</strike>文。 毕业后我去了香港大学。 <strike>不幸地</strike>很不幸开始工作后没有机会讲那些语言，<strike>。 没有必要。</strike>于是就慢慢地忘记我所学的了。现在我们<strike>在</strike>处于电脑时代， 几分钟之内<strike>会</strike>就能跟全世界联系<strike>。</strike>，真是非凡的。 italki 这样的网站让我们很容易掌握一门外语<strike>。</strike>，所以我<strike>再</strike>又开始学我从前学<strike>得</strike>的外语了。 开始跟外国人交换语言的时候，我发现了一件事， 中国人比欧洲人更<strike>有</strike>愿意帮助别人, 。 不知道为什么<strike>可是</strike>有许多中国人愿意跟我交换语言，因此我决定继续学中文， 就忘记学其他欧洲语言了。
            不管怎样， 普天之下没有哪国人比中国人更亲切。也许欧洲人对忘年交不感兴趣。你说为什么？

    写的很好了，注意一下句子间的因果关系，还有同一个内容的句子可以用“，”隔开，一个内容结束，开始下一个内容时用“。”结尾。

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    First notebook entry: Introducing myself Hi！my English name is Cheryl . I study English at school and I wanna make friends with foreigner . Is there anyone wants to be my friend ? I’d like to help you improve your Chinese . I'm from Nanning , Guangxi , China .My hometown is a very beautiful place , though it is not well-known . Here is warm and the air is so balmy and fresh . The scenery is so charming , there are trees and flowers everywhere . I hope you will come here one day .
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