First notebook entry: Introducing myself
Hi！my English name is Cheryl . I study English at school and I wanna make friends with foreigner . Is there anyone wants to be my friend ? I’d like to help you improve your Chinese .
I'm from Nanning , Guangxi , China .My hometown is a very beautiful place , though it is not well-known . Here is warm and the air is so balmy and fresh . The scenery is so charming , there are trees and flowers everywhere . I hope you will come here one day .
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
Hi！my English name is Cheryl . I study English at school and I wanna make friends with foreigner . Is there anyone wants to be my friend ? I’d like to help you improve your Chinese .I'm from Nanning , Guangxi , China .My hometown is a very beautiful place , though it is not well-known . Here is warm and the air is so balmy and fresh . The scenery is so charming , there are trees and flowers everywhere . I hope you will come here one day .
Hi！mMy English name is Cheryl . I study English at school and I wanna want to make friends with foreigner have foreign friends . Is there anyone who wants to be my friend ? I’d like to help you improve your Chinese .
I'm from Nanning , Guangxi , China . My hometown is a very beautiful place , though it is not well-known .Here It is warm here and the air is so balmy and fresh . The scenery is so charming , there are trees and flowers everywhere . I hope you will come here one day .
I'm from Nanning , Guangxi , China . My hometown is a very beautiful place , though it is not well-known .
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Wanna is OK for young people talking to each other but it is not good English.
We always leave one blank space after a command two blank spaces after a period. It makes the writing prettier and easier to read.
Although sometimes we say "make friends," we don't usually say "I want to make friends with ..." That's Chinese grammar with English words - Chinglish. We usually use the verb, to be. For example: I'd like to be your friend.
HOWEVER, although it is common for girls your age to say that, we don't often say that to strangers. For most of us a friend is someone we have known for a while and know something about.
Here you could say something like, I'd like to have a language exchange with foreigners.
I'd like to get to know some foreigners is probably the closest to 交朋友 or 作朋友
Although sometimes we say "make friends," we don't usually say "I want to make friends with ..." That's Chinese grammar with English words - Chinglish. We usually use the verb, to be. For example: I'd like to be your friend.
HOWEVER, although it is common for girls your age to say that, we don't often say that to strangers. For most of us a friend is someone we have known for a while and know something about.
Here you could say something like, I'd like to have a language exchange with foreigners.
I'd like to get to know some foreigners is probably the closest to 交朋友 or 作朋友
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