Please correct my essay. The advantages and disadvantages of chosen profession

Choosing a profession is one of the most complicated decisions, because your future somehow will depend on this choice. It does take a lot of years and work to master any field and if you <s>do</s> make a wrong choice, you can end up by wasting so much time. I <s>did</s> made my decision and now I am studying finance. There were many factors, which influenced <s>on</s> me when I chose my profession. One of these factors was advantages of becoming a financier.

Every profession has its own unique advantages. When it comes to finance, I can surely say that being financially literate is a crucial skill in our lives. Because we live in a world, where money plays an important role and no one can deny it or live without them. Consequently, everyone should know about finance as much as they can. Because if you know about financing <s>more</s> well enough, you will manage your money effectively.

As well as advantages, my profession has its disadvantages. The most obvious one is technological progress. It is a fact that computers and robots will replace many professional workers. After some years, there will not be any <s>person </s>people who work<s>s</s> as a financier. If this happens after 5 years, it will be a disaster for many people especially for me. Because I will become unemployed and I will need to study again.

In conclusion, I want to say that <s>all</s> every <s>of</s> profession has advantages and disadvantages. I like my profession and I can say that there are much more advantages than disadvantages.