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    Could you help me improve this paragraph? Thanks~ Third, the writer is worried that there wouldn't be enough sunlight people can use due to the thick cloud on Venus that's blocking the light to reach the surface. However, this problem can also be solved by building the station in the sky. The listening affirms that in this way, people can make use of the sunlight in two ways. One is to receive light directly coming from the sun, and the other is to collect the light that's being reflected by the cloud. This forms a sharp contradiction against the writer's view.
    September 30, 2019
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    Никогда такого не было и вот опять: 秋天来了

    我们俄语中有“Никогда такого не было и вот опять!” 这个说法,不知道用中文怎么说。意思是我们没想到事情会发生,但是它其实是很有可能发生的。我们没想到秋天这么冷,但是秋天就是这么冷。(这个意思在中文大概可以说“意料之外,情理之中”。)

    我真觉得今年秋天来得很突然。上周我穿着T恤和短裤去上班,今天变得这么冷就换成毛衣和外套,再戴上帽子,可是我觉得还是<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">穿</s>不够暖和。
    真不喜欢冷<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">的</s>天<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">气</s>。对我来说,早上起床是一件不容易的事情。天气冷的时候我更不想起床。
    再说,我的宝贝这几天不在家,我都快冻死了!😄
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    September 19, 2019
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    we can improve our socialization skill by paying attention to different opinions First, we can improve our socialization skill by paying attention to different opinions. Usually, we could easily form a connection with those who share a similar view with us, but when we interact with someone whose ideas we don't agree with, things get tricky. We find ourselves don't know what to say either because of the lack of knowledge of certain topics, or because we totally disagree with the other person. However, if we had previously exposed to similar ideas on television or newspaper, we would be able to talk about it and give our own comment of the issue. If the person whom we are talking to don't agree with us, we can exchange our reasons and have a civilized conversation. The result will be beneficial for both of us since the process of reasoning would make it easier to understand where each other stands and therefore bring us closer to each other.
    September 18, 2019
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    September 17, 2019
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    the beginning paragraph of an essay As we grow up and experience more in our life, it is not difficult to find out that people share completely different views about things. At first, we might feel others are ridiculous. However, gradually we would understand that people are not the same and there are people who share fundamentally different values as we do. So what should we do about this situation, which is not only a part of our daily life, but also a big deal about the survival of our civilization? Personally, I suggest we should try to read and watch the news presented by those who are different from ourselves.
    September 17, 2019
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    今天晚上在去散步的时候,看到一只受伤的小鸟

    今天在去上班的时候,在马路上我看到一只受伤的小鸟,
    今天在去上班的时候,我在马路上看到一只受伤的小鸟,(先说主语更顺一点)

    一个女人帮它去到草地上,
    一个女人正把它移到草地上,(小鸟已经不能动,所以动作发出者是女人,若用“帮”表达的意思是在女人的帮助下小鸟自己移动的)

    它看起来不能飞,也许它的翅膀受伤,所以我们给它一些坚果来吃。
    它看起来不能飞,也许它的翅膀受伤了,于是我们给它买了一些坚果来吃。(“所以”的强调因果关系比较强烈,这里可以用“于是”。“我们给它一些坚果来吃”语法上没问题的,可是有点奇怪,因为一个句子里主语先是“我们”,最后的“来吃”又使得“它”成了主语,你可以把“来吃”去掉,或者像我改的加上“买了”。)

    其实帮它有点难,因为它对我们害怕,
    其实帮它有点难,因为它怕我们,(害怕是动词,可以直接说,另外,中文看重精简,一个“怕”就能表达出“害怕”了)

    所以给它食物后,我们让它休息,希望它可以很快变好!
    所以给它食物后,我们让它自己休息,希望它可以很快变好!(不能只是rest,要rest alone)

    我也很好奇这里的猫咪会注意它,其实它有点大,而且这里的猫咪有点宠坏,胖乎乎和懒惰,因此没有大欲望吃的!
    我也很担心这里的猫咪会不会注意它,因为它个头有点大,不过这里的猫咪都被主人宠着,又胖又懒,大概不会来吃它的!(这段逻辑不太通顺,不过可以读懂,我直接改了,主要是一些连接词)

    今天吃完晚餐后,我们去阳台上看日落,哇,真的超级美丽,特别橘红色的天空。
    今天吃完晚餐后,我们去阳台上看日落,哇,橘红色的天空,真的超级美。(因为你只说了橘红色的天空,并没有体现出哪里“特别”,比较短,所以放在前面。但若你罗列许多事物,就放在后面,作为对“美”的进一步解释。比如可以这样:哇,真的超级美,晚风夹杂着花木的幽香,轻轻拂去了我一天的劳累,眼前的高楼遮挡不住远处的太阳,天空被它染成橘红,将高楼也照地金灿灿的。)
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    September 17, 2019
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    Agree or disagree: Nowadays it is not important for people to have regularly family meals together. Having meals are definitely one of the most important activities in our lives, because it is not only about filling the belly, but also a chance to interact and connect with other people. Different people from different time period may vary in their choosing of eating companion. Notably, people used to prefer having family meals regularly in the dining room in their home, while nowadays they are more likely to ask a friend out to a restaurant. This trend is becoming more and more clear and I think it is mainly caused by the shift in the center of socialization from home to workplaces. In the past, people used to relay on their family members to provide resources and connections in society. If you come from a family of scientists, then you are most likely to grow up interacting with professors, scholars and even astronauts. Naturally, you would hang out in places like libraries and labs, and would pick up knowledge in that area more than others like someone whose family are in the industrial business. It is safe to say that in the old days, family was one’s access port to society. When having meals together, family members would exchange their information about events that have happened and people they have met. It is important for everyone to gather around a table and bound with each other, because a family is a group of people that share a common interest and look after each other when in trouble in society. But ever since the Industrial Evolution, this pattern has been broken. With the invention of machines that can produce far more effectively, people start to work in factories instead of their own home. This means one can make a living for himself if he has the knowledge of operating certain machine. This kind of knowledge is not necessarily attached to certain family but is instead open in the society for everyone who’s willing to learn. Under this circumstance, it is not surprising at all that people stopped dining with their family. After all, with friends made in workplace, one has more immediate access to the latest news about business. (Continue in the picture...) (Sorry, it's a bit long, thanks a lot~~)
    September 17, 2019
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