Influence of the Internet on University Students
As we all know,
the Internet
is more and more popular among <strike>
the</strike> university students.
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Not only does it make a big difference in students' stud
ies,
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but
it also play
s a
n important role in
a student
's
<strike>'s</strike> daily life.
On the one hand,
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some people think it <strike>
take</strike>
is an advantage
for students' stud
ies.
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Not only can it broaden students' views without go
ing out,
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but
it is also convenient
for students in <strike>
finding</strike>
to find some related information.
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On the other hand,
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others feel it <strike>
take</strike>
is a disadvantage to students' stud
ies.
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As the students take
[we often say "spend" instead of "take"] a lot of time <strike>
in</strike> playing computer games,
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they always forget to study.
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Then,
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more and more unhealthy i
nformation <strike>
in</strike>
on the internet may lead students to
wrorry [I'm not sure here] way.
From my perspective,
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I think it
is useful to <font class="Apple-style-span" color="#FF0000">a student's studies</font>.
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If only they
would find <strike>make </strike>a balance between playing and studying,
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they
could make full use of
the internet.
ps.This composition is my homework.
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Could you give me some advice to my writing?
Make sure you put spaces after using a period [.] or a comma [,]
Good job!
