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    Formal cover letter

    I am writing to you in order to send you my Curriculum Vitae to aspire to the vacancy of XXX .
    During my studies in Business Administration and MBA I have <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">done</s> completed academic stays and internships abroad that have allowed me to improve my English and French, broaden my horizons, and enhance<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">d</s> my tolerance for uncertainty. I have also <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">done volunteering (teaching Spanish to inmigrants and refugees, among other things)</s> been a volunteer Spanish teacher for immigrants and refugees, and have developed my communication and collaboration skills through additional <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">courses</s> coursework.<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">,</s> <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">which have given me other skills (for example communication and collaboration) and knowledge</s>.
    Thanks to my academic, personal and professional experiences, I have been able to learn the importance of <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">working as a team</s> teamwork, <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">have</s> flexibility, and <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">learn from others and share knowledge</s> collaboration<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">,</s> <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">to</s> in <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">improve</s> improving and <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">achieve</s> achieving common goals. Beyond <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">the</s> my studies, language<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">s</s> proficiency, and international experiences, I <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">can contribute with my</s> am also eager<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">ness</s> to undertake new challenges and learn, and am <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">adaptability</s> adaptable and <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">versatility</s> versatile.
    I would be delighted to be able to work in a leading company in <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">it´s </s>the ____ (business/commerce) sector with a great international presence, such as XXX, and whose activity I <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">really like</s> admire. <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">And</s> I truly believe that my past experiences, education, and skills will make me a valuable asset for your organization.
    Thank you for your consideration.
    Sincerely.
    Ana XXX

    Despite all of the red marks, there's really only one thing that seems to be an issue here: you don't keep your grammatical tense consistent throughout single sentences. Just make sure to pay attention to that and you'll showcase an excellent command of English. The rest of this is very good. Well done! :)
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    August 21, 2019
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    Monsefú Craft Fair

    Monsefú is a Peruvian city, capital of the Monsefú district, which makes up the Province of Chiclayo, located in the Department of Lambayeque.
    Monsefú retains its tradition of crafts in hand embroidery, straw fabrics and jewelry. In this town (earlier you called Monsefú a "city"...this is different from a town, so you should use the same word in both locations!) creativity can be seen in their hats, baskets, and saddlebags, among other<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">s</s> things. The master craftsmen present the essence of their traditions <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">that have</s> which are an inheritance <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">of</s> from the Moche culture.

    Great job! Only small grammatical corrections here. The paragraph is still very much intelligible! :)
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    August 20, 2019
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    the redback spider is from Australia, so I'm not sure if their hyphenation rules are different, but in American English, if you're putting a color before a noun as a descriptor, you link the two with a hyphen: i.e. "the hawk with a red tail" is "the red-tailed hawk," or "the boy with blue eyes" is "the blue-eyed boy." If I hadn't seen "redback" first written that way, my assumption would have been to write is as "red-back." It's definitely a grammatical exception.
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    August 20, 2019
    5