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Formal cover letter I am writing to you in order to send you my Curriculum Vitae to aspire to the vacancy of XXX . During my studies in Business Administration and MBA I have done academic stays and internships abroad that have allowed me to improve my English and French, broaden my horizons and enhanced my tolerance for uncertainty. I have also done volunteering (teaching Spanish to inmigrants and refugees, among other things) and courses, which have given me other skills (for example communication and collaboration) and knowledge. Thanks to my academic, personal and professional experiences I have been able to learn the importance of working as a team, have flexibility, learn from others and share knowledge, to improve and achieve common goals. Beyond the studies, languages and international experiences I can contribute with my eagerness to undertake new challenges and learn, adaptability and versatility. I would be delighted to be able to work in a leading company in it´s sector with a great international presence, such as XXX, and whose activity I really like. And I truly believe that my past experiences, education and skills will make me a valuable asset for your organization. Thank you for your consideration. Sincerely. Ana XXX

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Formal cover letter

I am writing to you in order to send you my Curriculum Vitae to aspire to the vacancy of XXX .
During my studies in Business Administration and MBA I have done completed academic stays and internships abroad that have allowed me to improve my English and French, broaden my horizons, and enhanced my tolerance for uncertainty. I have also done volunteering (teaching Spanish to inmigrants and refugees, among other things) been a volunteer Spanish teacher for immigrants and refugees, and have developed my communication and collaboration skills through additional courses coursework., which have given me other skills (for example communication and collaboration) and knowledge.
Thanks to my academic, personal and professional experiences, I have been able to learn the importance of working as a team teamwork, have flexibility, and learn from others and share knowledge collaboration, to in improve improving and achieve achieving common goals. Beyond the my studies, languages proficiency, and international experiences, I can contribute with my am also eagerness to undertake new challenges and learn, and am adaptability adaptable and versatility versatile.
I would be delighted to be able to work in a leading company in it´s the ____ (business/commerce) sector with a great international presence, such as XXX, and whose activity I really like admire. And I truly believe that my past experiences, education, and skills will make me a valuable asset for your organization.
Thank you for your consideration.
Sincerely.
Ana XXX

Despite all of the red marks, there's really only one thing that seems to be an issue here: you don't keep your grammatical tense consistent throughout single sentences. Just make sure to pay attention to that and you'll showcase an excellent command of English. The rest of this is very good. Well done! :)

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