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- IELTS WRITING TASK 2 TOPIC: In many countries, it is now possible for people to buy products made in other countries. To what extent do the benefits of this development outweigh the problem? Nowadays various goods produced in other countries contribute a large portion to the market of a number of countries. In my opinion, this kind of phenomena can to a great extent improve the living standards of consumers although a large amount of imports may threaten the existence of some local enterprises. Goods imported from overseas benefits the consumers in several different aspects. Firstly, consumers are offered more options for the same sort of goods because other countries may produce many different categories of products that are difficult or unable to provide locally. For instance, consumers in the countries in the north like Russia can have coconuts by importing them from countries in the tropic. Secondly, imported products are often competitive in price. The main reason is that these countries have the technology and knowledge to control the cost in manufacturing to ensure the price of goods affordable. For example, China specialises in manufacturing silks of better quality and lower costs, so many countries prefer importing Chinese silks to producing silks by themselves. It is also beneficial to local customers for the decline of living costs. On the other hand, the downside of importing products is that excessive dependent on imports possibly leads to the underdevelopment of certain domestic industries and the bankruptcy of local manufacturers. For example, many countries import from overseas the electronic chips but fail to develop their own industry and if the country of manufacturers abruptly stop the supply the industry related to that will paralyse. Therefore, over-dependency in import is harmful to develop a self-contained economy. In conclusion, it is reasonable to think that, due to the international exchange of commodities, consumers can obtain various goods in a lower price but local companies will be confronted with a more drastic competition.August 23, 201910
- IELTS WRITING TASK 2 TOPIC:In many countries traditional food is being replaced by international fast food. This has negative effects on both families and societies. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Nowadays, people in most countries tend to prefer fast food than traditional food and this trend is thought to have a detrimental impact on families as well as societies. In my opinion, fast food threatens traditional cuisine in many cultures and deserves people’s emphasis on the problems it may cause but indeed caters to people’s real demand of contemporary life. Fast food have influenced people’s ways of life, including their dietary habits. Traditional cuisine focuses on the quality of raw materials, method of cooking and the diversity of flavours, evolved by embracing, fusing and extracting the essence of cuisine in various culture. On the contrary, most fast food chains provide only very simple food like roasted chicken, hamburgers and pizzas. People’s menus become monotonous with some traditional recipes fading out. Owing to the uniform diet of fast food, many countries have been witnessing the soaring of overweight and obese population, now an important issue of health for obesity closely relates to heart diseases. Fast food is usually junk food because of the large amount of fat, sugar, salt and calories it contains. Therefore, fast food not only does harm to individual health but also cost the government much money to tackle the issue. However, fast food is of certain value especially in this epoch. This is an era when most people are in pursuit of efficiency of work and believe in the maxim that time is money and thus, it is reasonable that they tend to save as much time as possible. Therefore, fast food naturally becomes their best choice to save time. In conclusion, though fast food imposes a severe threat to not only the cuisine of traditional culture but also its harm on health that ought to raise people’s caution, fast food is yet irreplaceable for people are in real need of adapt to the fast pace of current life.August 21, 201900
- IELTS WRITING TASK 2 TOPIC: It is argued that we are living in a throw-away society: people throw away what they use in daily life, instead of recycling or reusing them. Why has this happened and how to address this issue? Nowadays people tend to discard the products used only once even though the items are still reusable, while previous generations used to recycle these goods for quite a long time. This essay is to explore the causes of this worrying trend and figure out solutions accordingly. Consumers no longer keep goods for a long period of time because these products are not so expensive as before and new products emerge and fade more frequently. In general, not only does individual income of common people gradually increase, but, meanwhile, the costs on manufacturing are remarkably reduced year by year with the advances of technology and batch production applied to a large variety of goods. Therefore, products become cheaper to most of them. What is more, new products with a fair price in place of the old are created to cater to and spur consumer demand. For instance, people, especially youths, are keen on new mobile phones not so expensive but with new functions, usually out of curiosity and to follow the fashion, and naturally, abandon the old ones. Another reason is that most of people tend to neglect the environmental problems caused by this kind of lifestyle. Ignorant of the process of garbage disposal, people are too apt to underestimate the massive resource consumption and severe pollution generated by the waste of various products so easily discarded. For example, mobile phones are hard to degrade when ending up in landfill sites, and heavy metals in the battery can utterly lay waste to acres of soil. As the overconsumption of consumer goods is pervasive, it is important to take some measures to mitigate the problem. Environmental groups can disseminate the knowledge of how to recycle disposable goods and household appliances in order to raise people’s environmental awareness. The government can levy environmental taxes on some disposable products such as plastic bags to deter consumers from overconsumption and encourage people to use eco-friendly alternatives. In conclusion, the main cause of excessive consumption of disposable items is the change of people’s attitudes toward consumption and the increase in disposable income. To solve this problem, it is crucial to raise the awareness of environmental protection which leads to a change of lifestyle.August 15, 201900
- IELTS WRITING TASK2 The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system in an effort to deal with the health issue involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in the school curriculum. To what extent do you agree/disagre In order to deal with the widely focused problem of the growing population of overweight people, some people propose to introduce more physical education lessons in schools. I firmly support this proposal to tackle the health issue of overweight for students, but not so effective for those who have already graduated. Admittedly, to introduce PE lessons in school is the best way to deal with the health issue surrounding obesity and weight problems of students in terms of both an instant effect and a long-term result. For short term, this method will ensure a certain period of time for sports and exercise at school. By introducing benefits of the exercise and techniques of some particular sports in PE lessons, students will be more willing to do sports, enjoy sports and gradually develop the habit of doing sports both in and out of class. Currently, however, sports time for students is only about twice a week in average, far from enough to counteract the otherwise sedentary lifestyle. Therefore, such a method that can effectively increase sports time will undoubtedly make students fitter and more active. For long term, students’ developed habit and interest that have been incorporated into their daily life during school years will be maintained after graduation and what is more, filter through to other members in their family, thus expanding the population of sport. For instance, a father keen on sport will certainly fail to conceal this passion and otherwise manage to attract their children by displaying the charm of strength and veracity and exquisite techniques in a particular sport. In this way, the habit of doing sports is passed from generation to generation. Therefore, this is a natural and lasting way to promote a healthy life style and to improve public health. However, those who have graduated contribute a large part to the total population of the overweight but they cannot have a PE lesson like students. For these people, apart from advertising in social media to spread knowledge of health, it can be an effective way to offer subsidies to the gyms and shops for sport facilities so as to lower the price and thus encourage people to do sports.August 12, 201930
- new grammar于-他出生<s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">了</s>于1987年- 我将于今晚<s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">会结束</s>完成作业(‘于’ is too formal here, I would like to use '在' instead)- 家人将于七月去旅行It is more natural to put ‘将’ ahead of '于...' to indicate the time in the future无论- 无论你怎么决定,我都会支持你- 无论你选学习多少(I don't know what you mean here?),你都<s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">不</s>跟我不一样- 无论他去哪儿上班,<s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">也</s>都会比在这里好一切(means every/all adj./everything pron. and is usually used for emphasis, syn: 所有, 全部)Perhaps you have some misunderstanding of the word '一切' because the '一切's in the last two sentence are both confusing.e.g. 我所做的一切都是为了你。Everything I've done is on your own good.法院将驳回原告的一切诉求。This court will reject all claims by the plaintiff.- 我喜欢一切食物- 她不但不对<s>的</s> 而且有一切错误 ???- 这作家写了一切小说 ???0 votedAugust 11, 20190
- 我最喜欢学习汉语大家好。我叫玛利亚。关于学习汉语我有很不一般,很有意思的故事。我2004 年从学校(高中)毕业了。我不喜欢数学,物理学,化学和别的精密科学。这些科对我来说很难学。因为我的理科成绩不高,所以我决定在大学学习历史和语言。我对人文科学有很大的兴趣。但学什么语言呢?欧洲语言还是亚洲语言?我的选择很简单。我很喜欢字,所以我选择学日本语。8月22号我和我一家人一起去旅游。这是爸爸奖励我进入大学的礼物。9月八九号我们回家的时候,我去上大学。我的同学们已经学了一个星期多了,我迟到了。我对我的学习很满意。我们写很多字,但我们没有课本。一周后我发现我学习的是汉语,不是日本语,是汉语!!!我的天!从那时候起我开始学习汉语。我学得很努力,我是很认真的学生。我大学毕业以后,就考了hsk 五级考试。.尽管我考试考得很好,可是我的汉语口语不标准,我说得不流利。之所以这样,是因为在大学我们只有俄罗斯汉语老师,我们五年级都没有中国汉语老师。我大学毕业以后认识了很多中国朋友。我很感谢他们。我的汉语水平提高了。我大学毕业以后,成为了一名家教。我教小孩子们汉语。五年多我一直用很简单的句子和生词,因为孩子的汉语水平<s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">绝</s>不高。我用简单的语法和语句说了很长时间,所以我自己的汉语水平<s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">减低</s>降低了。<s>不管这可情况</s>尽管这样,我的三个学生<s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">考</s>通过了HSK4 级考试。现在他们都在中国大学学习。我为他们自豪。然后我可爱的女儿出生了。这<s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">些</s>三年是最幸福的。但是我的汉语水平越来越低。我<s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">失去</s>降低了两个<s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">水平</s>等级。现在我的汉语水平只有Hsk3级。我从来在困难面前不退缩。现在我在hscake继续学习汉语。Uliana是一位很棒的老师!我认识她很高兴。她的课总是很有意思。她帮助我们了解各种各样的问题。谢谢你,Uliana.我们的老师Julia和王梦经常参与我们的<s>成绩</s>课程,她们每天教我们,总是帮助我们。我很感谢她们!姑娘,你们做了非常重要的事情!0 votedAugust 9, 20191
- IELTS writing practice 1 Topic:In many countries today, people in cities either live alone or in small family units, rather than in large, extended family groups. Is this a positive or negative trend? Nowadays many countries are witnessing a gradual transformation of city inhabitants’ inclination to live from in joint families to in nuclear families or even on their own. This trend is by and large positive because a decrease in the size of family tends to reduce unnecessary family conflicts and means more freedom to some extent, but it goes too far to live alone, which may lead to much inconvenience to our life, especially when trouble comes. One evident advantage of nuclear families, compared to large families, is the convenience and easiness to reach an agreement on various household affairs. In general, more people involved in a process of decision are always followed by more requirements to consider and fulfil, rendering the process more complicated and the result less likely to satisfy everyone, and so is it on family affairs. Those who are seldom satisfied are certainly unhappy or even feel slighted, which, therefore, buries the seed of family conflicts with the accumulation of unhappiness. For instance, cooking a meal, very simple daily work, can be a burden for the chef in consideration of different flavours that members in a large family are fond of respectively. On the contrary, a family of small size can easily reach an agreement and thus avoid such conflicts. From the perspective of individuals, it means more freedom to make a decision from tiny to huge with less people concerned. As a result, there is less unnecessary tension between family members and everyone has enough freedom to choose the way of their lives. Although living alone can bring most freedom without constraints from family, life can be tough without the harbour of love. When we are tired, family will sincerely comfort us. When we are ill, family will keep us company day and night. When we fail in work, family will encourage and support us all the time. Consider that when suffering from a sudden disease with nobody around, how desperate we will be in that case! In conclusion, to live in a nuclear family is a positive trend not only well balancing both personal freedom and family love, but also mitigating family conflicts due to large size of family.August 8, 201930
- 练习生词吧1)写一篇文章的时候,你应该注意观众(better to use '读者, reader')是谁。2)我害怕5年后头发都脱(correct but we use ‘掉’ here more often)光了。3)我出生以前,我妈就决定了戒烟。4)我不太喝咖啡,不好消化。5)美国的本质是资本主义,哪里都能感受到他的势力。6)往返差不多2个小时吧,不用着急。7)西方人可能会觉得日本人,中国人,韩国人的样子很<s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">仿佛</s>相似(‘仿佛’ is a verb 'seem/seem like/seem that' or an adv. 'seemingly'. ‘相似/相仿’ means ‘similar’, more appropriate here. '相仿佛' means ‘相仿’,but seldom used)。8)川普还没承认枪支法需要很大的变化(It is correct. But '改变' seems more natural here, perhaps owing to the contonation of '改')。9)我负责英语家教,从事解决留学生的语言困难。(You do the job of solving problems not the job of problems)10)政府关闭了那个工厂,因为(careful about the coherence of the sentence)他们没有<s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">答应</s>遵守(‘答应’ means 'agree with/respond to', '遵守' means 'obey'. 遵守规定 obey the rule)安全规定。总的来说做得不错,以后可以重点关注下词汇的准确含义和用法,祝你学得开心,并取得进步~0 votedAugust 8, 20191
- Five more phrases1. 学习中文每天一个小时时间不足以. 要学好中文每天一小时是不够的(Studying Chinese everyday for one hour is not enough).2. 坐公共汽车的时候,我们必须买<s>一张</s>票.(When using the bus, we must buy a ticket).3. 我们必须<s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">长发马上</s>马上开始(上)今天的课.(We must start today's lesson immediately).4. 午夜,他看到<s>了</s>一条龙在云边.(At midnight, at the edge of the cloud he saw a dragon).5. 要休息的时候,我会听音乐或者读书.(When I want to relax, I listen to music or read a book).Please be kind enough to correct those sentences and/or suggest better alternatives.0 votedAugust 7, 20191

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