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大家好!我的名字是Christine,你也可以叫我江铃,这是我的中文名字。 我是澳大利亚人,我一直都住在布里斯班。虽然我爱我的家乡,但是我也非常喜欢旅游。有一天我想要去很多世界各地。直到去年我才开始学习汉语,不过现在是我最大的爱好。在学习期间,我见过很多非常棒的人,也学到了很多东西。我相信学习语言是通向世界其他地方的窗户。
除了学汉语以外,我也喜欢玩儿游戏、写故事、看电视、跟我的宠物鼠玩。我在一个诊所担任接待员,我很喜欢我的工作。
有一天,我希望我能学会说多种语言,但现在我只是享受这个过程。
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- 请帮助我理解这首诗 今天我看了一首古诗,唐代崔道融的《梅花》。这是那首诗: 数萼初含雪,孤标画本难。 香中别有韵,清极不知寒。 横笛和愁听,斜枝倚病看。 朔风如解意,容易不摧残。 虽然我觉得这首诗挺好听,我听不懂一些句子,也什么英文的翻译都找不到。所以,我会尽力解释每个句子,那如果你可以的话请纠正我的语法并告诉我的解释是不是正确的。 “数萼初含雪,孤标画本难。” 这两句形容梅花。“萼”是一朵花的绿色部分。它保护了年轻的花蕾。花开以后,萼留在花的下面。在这首诗里,我觉得萼上有雪。明白“孤标画本难”对我特别难。我觉得它的意思就是画梅花很难。 “香中别有韵,清极不知寒。" 我觉得这部分继续形容梅花,但是也有点儿难懂。可能梅花闻起来很香。因为梅花在冬天开,所以在我看来这第二句指梅花不是被寒冷影响的,它们“不知”寒。 “横笛和愁听,斜枝倚病看。” 我觉得这部分说梅花的枝横斜错落,看起来很病。或者这部分也可能是关于诗人的感情。我不知道。 “朔风如解意,容易不摧残。” 因为梅花在冬天开花,它代表坚持在困难中。跟北风一样,梅花又坚固又难以摧残。 诗歌经常用隐喻,有很多层次的意义。一个单词能够有多种意思。可能在这首诗,梅花指一个人,或者大自然,这两个我们应该都保护。 我对你什么帮助我的写作和我对这首诗的解释都很感谢。我也感谢你对这首诗的解释。January 6, 202162
- Don`t slip on the mountainOne day, we walked to the mountains. The weather was sunny, so Salah and Mohamad wanted to climb the mountain. (You could also say "Salah and Mohamad wanted to go mountain climbing.")Then, suddenly, Salah slipped because he ran too fast; he broke his foot and twisted his ankle. Mohamad took his phone next and called an ambulance.Not long after, an ambulance came and took me (Are the speaker and Salah different people? Or are you switching from Third Person Point of View to First Person?) to the hospital. The doctor then pushed me in a wheelchair and told me, "Don`t climb mountains, it's dangerous."Finally, when we got back home and ate cornflakes, Salah said, "Today was a beautiful day for Mohamad but it was awful for me."This is a very interesting story! The only thing that is unclear is whether or not "We" refers to just Salah and Mohamad, or to Salah, Mohamah and an unknown third person (the speaker/Point of View person). It sounds like the Point of View changes a few times throughout the story. If the "me" who gets taken to the hospital is Salah, it has to use his name or a he/him pronoun instead of a personal pronoun. Otherwise, you can instead use personal (I/me) pronouns whenever Salah is mentioned in the passage instead of his name, to keep it consistent. I hope this helps/makes sense! Let me know if there's anything else I can explain!0 votedAugust 29, 20201
- Please check my mistakes1、I can speak English. (Perfect!)2、I believe I can study English well.3、My name is Da Hua Sun4、I am from Sichuan.5、I am currently studying math.6、I get up at 7 am every day/every morning.7、I like computer games.8、I'm not entirely sure about this one, but I think "This is my first time writing an article on the net" might be what you're going for!Hi Sun, I hope this helps! By the way, I assume you're needing English corrections, but I think you've sorted this into the Mandarin language articles by mistake :)0 votedAugust 29, 20200
- 狂犬病的疫苗的研究 最近我工作的旅游诊所没看到太多病人,因为这个新冠病毒,没有人能旅游。但是,幸好我们有其他的能做的事情。现在我们进行一项关于狂犬病的疫苗的研究。 通常,一个没已经打了狂犬病的疫苗的人被动物咬了的时候,他应该尽快地打四剂加强疫苗。他也需要注入伤口上面打一剂狂犬病免疫球蛋白。不仅这个很痛苦,这种药也很贵。但是如果这个人已经预先接种疫苗,他被动物咬以后只是需要打两剂加强疫苗,也不需要打狂犬病免疫球蛋白。所以,如果一个人经常在动物周围,预先接种疫苗可以很有用。但是,狂犬病的疫苗可能有点儿贵。而且,你必须三剂被认为是受保护的。虽然三剂被视为终身有效,有些人只需要很短时间的保护。所以,在我们的研究实验,我们想知道只有一剂疫苗多么有效。 为了回答这个问题,我们先给参加者一剂狂犬病的疫苗,再两个月以后检查他们有多少抗体。接着我们给他们打两剂加强疫苗然后几天以后重新检查他们的抗体水平。因为他们已经被打了这个第一剂,所以他们的身体对加强剂的反应能很快地做新的抗体。August 28, 202040
- Robot and AI WorkThe progress and unceasing development of humanity does not stop. More and more robots have been entering our homes. Some people think that a robot in the house can help parents take care of small children and can play with them, but others think a robot reduces the job opportunities for some people. I think everything has both advantages and disadvantages. If you only look at the bad things you will not like it. If you change your angle you will find other things (you could also say "If you change your angle you will see other points of view")This is a very good point! I don't think robots are inherently good or bad, it all depends on how they are used.0 votedAugust 27, 20200
- Improving English by notebook correction.Brushing up on any language is quite hard work and an excruciating experience, especially when you are hitting the plateau of a certain level. At this level it seems that self-study stops working, because there is nobody who can correct you and you unintentionally make the same mistakes again and again. But thanks to this platform where I can post the production of my mind (this sentence isn't wrong, but the phrasing sounds a little bit odd. I think "where I can post what is on my mind" or "whatever is on my mind" might work better here :) ), I can have some generous teachers check<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">ed</s> my work and point out my mistakes. (You could also say "But thanks to this platform, I can post the...")Writing is the section (you could also say "area" instead of "section" here) I am lacking <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">behind</s> in (or you can say "the section I am falling behind in"). I <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">didn’t get</s> haven't had the chance or the time to write in English, although you<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">r</s> may say that this is my lame excuse that I am making <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">to save</s> for myself. I must take responsibility to improve my writing. I hereby declare that I will write 100 notebooks in this year. It will be a 100 day<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">s</s> challenge and I am committed to it. I will sail through it. (Or you could say "I am committed to sailing through it)I request all of you who <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">is</s> are reading this please <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">I need a notebook correction </s>help me in this journey by correcting my notebooks. I promise you (<--this "you" is optional, but I think it sounds a little better without it, as in "I promise I will not disappoint you") I will not disappoint you teachers.Good luck with your 100 day challenge, that's an amazing goal! You're already writing really well, and I'm sure you will get even better with practice! I should follow your example, haha0 votedAugust 27, 20201

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