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    Hong <s>cong</s> Kong restaurant

    There was strong typhoon three days ago.
    I was scared.
    I went to have lunch and shopped with my mother yesterday.
    I went to a Hong Kong restaurant.
    My favorite Hong Kong restaurant's name is Touchou.
    I liked it there. It was delicious.
    After that, I bought a white blouse.
    My mother bought a shirt. It looks good on her.
    I wanted a new smart phone, phone case and pass case.
    After coming home, I studied English.
    I went to work. My boss gave me curry. So, I had a curry lunch today.
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    October 15, 2019
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    Ways in which people could be encouraged to take more exercise.

    Do you like sports (1)? Do you do exercise <s>like</s> as a routine or only <s>do exercise at the time </s>when you want yourself to look (2) <s>looked</s> fitter (3)? Although we know exercise is an important <s>part </s>way (4) for us to keep ourselves healthy, keep us in <s>a </s>good shape and make our thoughts (5) sharper, there are still many people who (6) do not like exercise. What is more, even if you <s>are not that </s> don't really (7) hate sports, it still seems difficult to maintain a consistent <s>sport</s> exercise habit. Is there any way to change it?
    First, <s>the </s>education is always essential. It can not (8) only<s> well </s>broadcast the various beneficial effects <s>influence</s> a good sport habit can bring, but also the relative physiological (9)and mental changes during our workout. For example, why do some of us feel pain<s>ful </s>when jogging while others feel like (10) they can run forever without limits? If we can know more about where these uncomfortable feeling come from during exercise and <s>we </s> (11) be well taught about how to deal with it or how to <s>ease</s> fight (12) the desire to quit, we are more likely to get used to exercise.
    Second, regarding <s> talking about not to quit</s> keeping a good habit, no other way is better than to make sports a compulsory obligation at work and school. We all have this familiar experience that we set up a goal to go to the gym every day after work, <s>we</s> (13) maintain it for a week and then <s>we</s> have to stop <s>it</s> (14) because we might have to (15) work a double-shift <s>a single</s> for the whole day the next week. there are a thousand<s>s</s> (16) excuses for us to quit the painful activity even though we <s>are so </s>it benefits us. Therefore, why not make it a mandatory (17) task? <s>Weather</s> Whether we like it or not, we need to do it and we will benefit <s>get the advantage</s> either way. Furthermore, sports is that kind of activity that as soon as you start getting used to it, you <s>would</s> will thirst <s>be more and more thirsting</s> for it more. If someone makes the exercise a rule at the painful beginning, it will help a lot.
    In conclusion, there <s>ate </s>are ways other people can help to encourage us to do exercise, but it is certainly true that we have to <s>cat</s> motivate ourselves. So, just do it! Let's do sports (19)!

    <ol><li>When we talk about 'sports' in general, we use the plural form. (E,g. doing sports, enjoying sports)</li><li>'Look fitter' is a goal, so the infinitive form of 'look' must be used</li><li>If the alphabet before the last consonant is a vowel (a, e, i, o, u), we must double the last consonant when adding -er or -ing. (E.g., sit --> sitting; fat --> fatter)</li><li>'Way' = method</li><li>'Thoughts' = noun; 'thought = verb (past tense of 'think')</li><li>Use 'who' to link 'many people' and 'do not like sports' together</li><li>'not really' = okay/fine with</li><li>Incomplete sentence</li><li>The adjective form of physiology is 'physiological'. We need to use the adjective form as we are using physiological to describe 'changes'.</li><li> 'feel like' (e.g., I feel like my feet have grown wings; he felt like butterflies were fluttering in his stomach)</li><li> No need to repeat main pronoun in same sentence</li><li> 'Fight' is a stronger verb that shows the struggle between the person and the desire to quit</li><li> Same as (11)</li><li> No need to add 'it' as it is clear that 'stop' refers to the exercise routine</li><li> When giving suggestions or reasons, we should add 'may' or 'might' to suggest why people might quit</li><li> A thousand excuses; thousands of excuses</li><li> 'Mandatory' = not optional</li><li> 'Weather' and 'whether' are homophones (they sound the same, but are spelled differently and have different meanings)</li><li> Add 'do' before 'sports' to turn it into a verb.</li></ol>
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    October 15, 2019
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    Can you use examples to illustrate the power of words?

    I would like to share with you my story. It <s>just </s>happened just a few weeks ago. I was having an optional class. To be honest, I wasn't in a good mood that day because I had <s>many</s> a lot of unfinished f6 homework <s>remained unfinished</s>. Suddenly, a boy sitting next to me asked me if he could take a look at my <s>acca</s> ACCA textbook. I had no idea who he was and why he wanted my textbook, but I still gave it to him. Later in the evening, I opened my textbook and surprisingly found a delicate piece of paper with <s>a line of word</s> the words 'ACCA 加油' written on it. My irritation disappeared all of a sudden. Just some simple uplifting words can make a person's day. That is my story.'

    <ol><li>We avoid using contractions in formal writing (I'd --> I would; That's --> That is)</li><li>Just happened = it happened a few seconds or minutes ago</li><li>'An' must be used for words beginning with vowels (with a few exceptions)</li><li>Homework is an uncountable noun, so 'many' cannot be used. Please use 'a lot of' instead.</li><li>ACCA is an abbreviation, so should be written in capital letters</li><li>Paper is also an uncountable noun, to make it countable (to quantify it), we must add 'piece'. (E.g., a piece of paper, three pieces of paper). If referring to lots of paper, a pile or a stack of paper may also be used to quantify paper.</li><li>We usually say "the words XXXXX was written on it". (E.g., The words 'Please don't smoke' was written on the billboard sign.)</li><li>Beautiful use of the adjective 'uplifting'. Beware of spelling. Investing in spell-checker devices may improve your spelling for easily confused words :)</li></ol>
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    October 15, 2019
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    北海道の旅行 (第一日) 今年の二月に彼氏と一緒に北海道へ旅行に行きました。彼は雪をたくさん見たかった、私も冬景色を見るのがほしかったです。新千歳空港到着した後で、JRの事故で、バスで定山渓へ行きました。定山渓は空港からちょっと遠かったです。空港から定山渓まで1時間かかりました。 あの夜は定山渓グランドホテル瑞苑という温泉旅館に泊まりました。初めて旅館に泊まったから、非常に緊張でした。温泉旅館は普通なホテルより古かったですが、とても美しかった。ロビーは広くて明るかったです。チェックインの後で、受付のそばに浴衣と帯を取りました。時間が足りたから、外でちょっと散歩しました。 泊まった旅館の近くにお店にで様々お土産を売っていました。富良野のメロンケーキと有名な札幌の白い恋人などがありました。定山渓のスペシャルは温泉饅頭です。この饅頭の中に十勝小豆がいっぱいで、とても甘くておいしかった。 夕食の前に、部屋で浴衣を着ました。浴衣を着たことがなかったので、着方が全然分かりませんでした。彼氏は浴衣を着れば、皆さんは僕のパンツを見ると言いました。でも、私たちは浴衣を着て行きました。晩ご飯は六時から八時まで二時間でした。色々な食べ物と飲み物がたくさんありました。そして、自分で海鮮丼を作れました。面白かったですよ。 つづく
    July 23, 2019
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    家の付近に何がありますか 私のうちはトクワ湾にあります。地下鉄の駅からとっても遠いから、地下鉄にはあまり乗りません。でも、港から近いです。よく船で学校へ行きます。 家の隣にスーパーと八百屋とコンビニがあります。買い物をするのが便利です。スーパーは八百屋より近いから、よくスーパーで食品を買います。野菜を買うと、八百屋へ行きます。その八百屋は様々な野菜を売ります。そちらのさつまいもは一番おいしいし、甘いし、安いから、大好きです。
    July 22, 2019
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    Card Game Meet-up

    The entrance fee is 500 yen. You don’t need to pay extra. You can have some snacks and a paper cup of juice. If there is still juice left, you can refill your cup. The meet-up is for communicating and making friends, so if you want to talk with us and play games together, join us:) We are going to have the meet-up from 3 p.m to 5 p.m.

    (1) 体言 + is/are + 値段

    E.g. This bag is 3,400 yen. (このかばんは3400円です。) 

    複数があると、"are" を使ってください。

    E.g. Two apples are 200 yen. (二つのりんごは200円です。)

    (2) ジュースは uncountable noun から、"is" を使ってください。

    (3) "for"と "the reason" と"the main purpose" の意味が同じです。ひとつだけ使ってください。

    - The main purpose of the meet-up is to communicate and make friends.

    - The reason for the meet-up is to communicate and make friends.

    - The meet-up is for communicating and making friends.

    以上全部は正しいです。

    (4) "Be going to"は "plans and intentions" (計画)

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    July 22, 2019
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    "Trying and failing" is almost exactly what it means literally: trying, or attempting to do something, but not doing well in the attempt. Example: I tried and failed to do well in my Math test. (take note that this phrase is 'tried AND failed', not 'tried but failed') For the phrase: "Like the evening before, he had the beach mostly to himself", let us split it into two. "He had the beach mostly to himself" means there were very few people on the beach, including the man himself. "Like the evening before" lets us know that there were also very few people on the beach last night. The phrase "have something to oneself" means occupying or enjoying something or even somebody without having to share it with others. For example, "I have the swimming pool [all] to myself" means you're the only person occupying or using the swimming pool. The 'all' is usually added for emphasis. It could also be used for food or other items that people would normally enjoy. For instance, "John had the cake [all] to himself", which means John is the only person enjoying the cake and doesn't have to share it. You can also say you have somebody all to yourself. For example, "After her brother went off to college, Christine finally had her mother all to herself." This phrase doesn't mean you own the person. Rather, it means the person's attention is entirely focused on you. This phrase may be considered rude depending on the situation due to the objectification of a person, as in, you treat somebody like an object.
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    July 22, 2019
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