Science and Art in our society.

on the next paragraphs, I discuss other's people opinions (This is a practice for IELTS exam)

So, please let me know if you understand the ideas I expressed and if you have any suggestion, please share it wih me.

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1. They maintain that modern-economies cannot advance without a strong scientific base. A case in point is Mexico which <s>have</s> has a lack of scientific researchers. Consequently this has an important impact on the economy of my country and it is still an undeveloped country.

2. It is argued by some people that Science has an effect on everything we do from eating to travelling. For instance, in the case of food, people can consume all types of products during all seasons of the year and this was <s>initiated</s> made possible by the <s>discoveries</s> discovery of Biology. Furthermore, the invention of the plane was possible with the principles of Physics. Thus, with this remarkable creation, we can travel faster and safer.

3. Some people feel that certain works of art that are produced are offensive and should be banned. Take as an example the citizens of my country who condemned the decision <s>of allowing to</s> to allow Mexican<s>s</s> artists to draw on some walls of the subway station because they considered urban art <s>as</s> inappropriate for the image of the city.

4. Many people think that scientists should have some involvement with artists and <s>vici</s> vice versa. Bringing these groups together would be better for society as a whole. A good example of this is when complex information from Science can be explained easier with a painting, music or statue. Thus, <s>the understanding of ppeople</s> people's understanding of difficult scientific concepts would be improved.

5. A commonly held belief is that spending time alone in laboratories without much human contact is not very interesting. Take as an example the vast amount of movies which has spread this image. As a result, science is considered as a boring career for a <s>considerebly</s> considerable amount of people.

6. Some people feel that many scientific experiments are dangerous to society. There are many examples where serious mistakes have been made. A case in point is the troubling experiments with nuclear energy carried out in Chernobyl which had not only negative effects on the environment but also on the health of thousand of people. As a result, the current society is more involved in <s>avoiding</s> assuring that these kinds of catastrophes do not take place again.