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    Please help me to correct this entry #5

    People who don't love or accept themselves tend to hide who they are to please others. They are people who are ashamed of themselves because they fear being rejected. Their fear is so big, that they don't skimp on paying the high price of ceasing to be spontaneous, natural and real, in order to be accepted. These people who pretend to be someone they are not, hurt themselves and everyone around them. Also, they forget that sooner or later the truth will come to light.


    Hey, this is well-written! I only have an extremely minor criticism, it really would be fine without this it's just for making the language more relaxed. The sentence "Their fear is so big, that they don't skimp on paying the high price of ceasing to be spontaneous, natural and real, in order to be accepted" reads as a little 'stiff' and unnatural, mostly the 'they don't skimp on paying the high price' part, maybe changing it to 'they are willing to pay the high price of...' instead feels more natural. Again, this is a very small thing, definitely not a necessity. 

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    Hola! I am looking to learn Spanish (Latin American) I am a native English speaker and am looking to meet a native Spanish speaker to chat to, maybe be penpals, generally help each other learn because this is my first time learning a language and I am beyond lost haha! Gracias x
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