Essay:
The knowledge that the superior-level institutions teach to their students has awared raised people´s concern recently. They argue that the formation that which the students learn  receive in school should be consider general information in general education, then they are  which would enable them to discuss about relevant issues and give their opinion--as opposed to specialized education.  rather the just preparing them for the positions that actual market demands. This essay, while discussing both points of view, also giving explanation and examples will argue why the idea of training students for specific jobs in the workplace is more reasonable.  that the workplaces require are a more reasonable.
It is logical  the way to think students should be prepared for general knowledge in order to give their opinion about to on diverse topics. In order to do it, school should get its pupils involved in several fields. For example,By adding optional courses such as debates about actual social issues This way, the individual would be able to develop their interests of the problems that are facing people today in our society. 

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It is essential to do sports when you're young. (check, please:))

In my opinion, doing sports is an absolutely vital activity for young people.
Firstly, it is widely known that sport has a positive impact on the physical and mental health of a person. One should also consider the long term health benefits which improve the quality of life in old age  take the long view in terms of health in order to feel better at a great age. Secondly, it is essential for young people to put time and effort into sporting activities as it cultivates discipline and healthy competition makes them more disciplined and competitive. As a consequence, their academic achievements improve.
However, the supporters of another point of view are sure that sport is not a must vital for youngsters. Such people claim that to do sports or not to do depends only on personal preferences.
Nevertheless, I cannot agree with the opinion above. Actually, sport is not a question of one's hobbies or personal preferences; it's a question of one's health, so everyone should care about it from a young age. 
To sum up, I am deeply convinced that it is vital for young people to find time for different sporting activities as it can help them in the future.

I would like to know how the native speakers express the following ideas in a formal way

My admission to the University was conditional because they University did not receive my official TOEFL score, and my official transcripts, and certificates. I ordered a report of my scores to be sent days ago and the University has received it. Since I did not have the official translations of my transcripts and certificates so I could not send them. Now I have gotten the official translations and I am ready about to send them.

Sports are a neccessity in schools or not? (IELTS ESSAY practice task 2 )

Hello everybody! this is my latest essay task 2 for my IELTS preparation in writing
Please let me know your opinion about the quality and coherence of my writing (to be honest, it is my weakness area haha)
Thank you in advance :)


There are those who think that all the kinds of sports should not be included in the education system. Nevertheless, I fully disagree with this position because of the positive effects on children who practice any kind of recreational activity.

Some people express that physical activities are not suitable in schools. However, academic learning is highly connected to them. All sports have a positive result on the velocity of learning because the human brain works effectively well when our body is exercised (based on the latest researches carried by neuroscience around the world). Take for example the academies of my country: Mexican institutions have sports as a compulsory class. Students choose it and consequently, they get excellent grades because their brain is stimulated though exercise.

Also, there are great benefits related to social and mental health. Firstly, it is widely known that children have more opportunities to develop social skills, such as empathy, when they practice a sports. For instance, in my country, Mexican schools have 20 minutes per day for playing football. This strategy was efficient in decreasing fights among students because they are in a relaxed environment conducive for where making friends is more likely to happen. This would lead to have a healthier improved mental health on in children, a prerequisite for success. for being a successful person.

In conclusion, the importance of sports in schools is very relevant because its great results has benefits in learning, social skills and mental health. Undoubtedly they must not be eliminated from academics.

I want to give up!

Recently, I am have been a little stressed. I really spend a long lot of time doing work and studying. As a consequence, I find it to be a very difficult task to: practice my favorite hobby, spend time with my parents, or go out with my, so on (son?). Therefore I am not getting the results as I would like to. What can I do?

Since this course started I have been trying to combine both things. I have worked as hard as possible to be responsible in my job and achieve good marks at university. Now, it takes me little time to finish my studies; I will dedicate my time to only one thing.

Sometimes, it is very complicated making decisions, but there is nothing left to do. So, I will keep at this line. At the end of the day life is a strong fight.

When you get older: a list of unpleasant things

When I was a child I wished I could have been older, it's always like this: you want something that you don't have and when you get it, you are not so as happy as you thought you would be. This could happen when you grow up. I thought being older could mean: doing more things, being more independent, being wiser, happily engaged (not to my cat) and a lot of exciting things! Well, surprise! It's not always like that.
A list of unpleasant things about getting older (just my experience, I hope your things are going better):
1. The first thing you look at in a guy is if he has a wedding ring (just because you can't check his criminal report) because, as we said, the best have already been taken;
2. You need to be careful about what you eat: fat loves your body as you love chocolate;
3. and so, you have to do exercise if you don't want to have problem with your breath every time you take a step (remember the song “every breath you take”? It could have been sung by a doctor in this case);
4. You stop smiling properly because of bags under your eyes;
5. your mantra for the weekend is “Too many things to do, too little money in my pockets”.
6. You have to relate with other people all the time;
7 you are going to lose your memory soon
8. What did you say?
9. Your sight and its stupid jokes: a tree that is dancing because of the wind could be a happy woman with a fancy dress who is waving at you (when you don't have your glasses on because you broke them and you tried to fix the situation with glue);
10. You start doing boring things but the big problem is that you think there they are funny!
11. Your humour could change and your trending topic of conversation could be random complaints and work (or both in the same sentence), ;
12. You keep making bad decisions (just look at the number 9 of this list..);
13. science says we are made up of 70% water, my mind says: “you are made of 70% anxiety and 30% pizza”.
14. too many pressures from society and your family: when you are a child you have just to eat vegetables, not go to bed late, and do your homework; when you grow up, society wants you to have a permanent job if you want your own house (so a loan agreement), to pay bills and get married with children.
So, in the end, being older is not so as exciting as I thought. I remember when I complained about school, my parents would always told tell me "you will see when you grow up". They were so right! The only advice I can give to myself and other people is, like a picture I saw on Facebook, "Don't grow up, it's a trap".