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Today I want to share with you my favorite film, <s>called</s> Harry Potter. It’s adapted from a series of fantasy novels written by J.K Rolling. It tells the adventures of the wizard Harry Potter and his best friends Ron Weasley and Hermione Granger at Hogwarts and advocates positive virtues: friendship, mutual trust and courage, unlike those junk ones flooded with porn, violence and cliche. I still remember the first time I walked into the cinema <s>film</s>, the visual effects and stunts impressed me a lot. I was shocked and couldn’t believe my eyes. When I saw the film, I felt as if I were studying and taking adventures in Hogwarts myself. The film satisfied all my fantasies about the magical world. It appealed to me very much! I became a huge fan of Harry Potter. After the film, <s>my heart went to the Hogwarts</s> Hogwarts had stolen my heart. I hoped I could receive <s>its</s> an offer to go and study there on in my 12th <s>year’s old</s> birthday, and I <s>have</s> even planned what I would do when I arrived at Hogwarts. I would choose to study in Ravenclaw because I liked reading lots of books. But on my birthday, <s>there was</s> no owl <s>coming</s> came to me. I was depressed but I didn’t give up. I found a branch and painted it with water colors, imagining it was my magic wand. I waved it and recited <s>the</s> magic spells in my spare time. What I recited most is the Wingardium Leviosa, and hoped <s>the</s> that I could make things <s>could</s> levitate. The most anticipated thing in my life is to read the latest book of Harry Potter.The thing I look forward to most in life is to read the latest Harry Potter book. Even today, I want to drink a butterbeer in winter.

And I want to share with you another interesting thing about the film. After watching <s>the</s> Voldemort’s face in Harry Potter and Sorcerer ‘s Stone in my childhood, believe it or not, I was afraid of darkness for several weeks, because I thought Voldemort would appear in the darkness and eat me. At that time, I always took my magic wand with me so as to protect myself.

In my view, we cannot have a prejudice against Slytherin. <s>There is not all bad people in Slytherin and not all good people in Gryffindor</s>. Not everybody in Slytherin is bad and not everybody in Gryffindor is good. Snape protected Harry in the rest while Peter Pettigrew betrayed Harry’s parents.

Harry is like a friend of me, we grew up together, but had to say goodbye at the end of story. What would come, and we would have to meet it when it did.

Daily feelings

Yesterday I had a speaking lesson with a foreign teacher. <s>Foreing-speaking.</s>

The teacher is very beautiful and humorous, I like her very much.

At the same time,I'm aware of some of my problems.

Such as,I'm not good at free-talking because I don't know what to say.

Maybe,I haven't spoken English for a long time, or I'm lacking <s>of</s> vocabulary.

So, I have made <s>make</s> a plan for <s>me</s> myself <s>that</s> . I'm going to memorize words for one hour <s>of words</s> everyday and I will also write a journal everyday.

<s>And</s> I believe that I will improve <s>it in a</s> my English that way.Tomorrow will be better.