I wrote an English writing and please correct it!! What is most important to you when choosing your future job? How deeply I love my job and how I’m interested in it, is the most important thing for me when I choose my job in the future. Because most people, in the world, spend most their time working, so if it is not interesting and exciting for me, it will so hard to continue to do the job, and I would feel that I would like to quit and change the job to more interesting one. Indeed, to be paid high salary is also important, because without any money, we are not able to make ours life, especially in modern society, it is safe to say that almost all of our life consists of money. However, I think that to work only to earn money is wrong. I would like to excite to my job, and experience various things through jobs. This is why whether the job is interesting for me or not, and whether I can love my job or not is the most important thing for me.

English writing; Playing video games should be recognized as an Olympic sport. I think that playing video games should be recognized as an Olympic Games, and I have two reasons to support this opinion. Firstly, in the world, playing video games has been recognized as e-sport, and become more popular than a decade ago. Secondly, if it is recognized as an Olympic sport, a lot of young people will have more interest in the Olympic Games. It must be good thing for the Olympic organizer. It is true that some people may get a disease caused by a short of working out or sedentary life style. However, playing video games has been become popular among not only young, but also even adult as e-sports, and it also has potential to make many people to pay more attention toward the Olympic Games. This is why I believe that playing video games should be recognized as an Olympic sport.