I wrote an English writing and please correct it!! What is most important to you when choosing your future job? How deeply I love my job and how I’m interested in it, is the most important thing for me when I choose my job in the future. Because most people, in the world, spend most their time working, so if it is not interesting and exciting for me, it will so hard to continue to do the job, and I would feel that I would like to quit and change the job to more interesting one. Indeed, to be paid high salary is also important, because without any money, we are not able to make ours life, especially in modern society, it is safe to say that almost all of our life consists of money. However, I think that to work only to earn money is wrong. I would like to excite to my job, and experience various things through jobs. This is why whether the job is interesting for me or not, and whether I can love my job or not is the most important thing for me.

English writing; Playing video games should be recognized as an Olympic sport. I think that playing video games should be recognized as an Olympic Games, and I have two reasons to support this opinion. Firstly, in the world, playing video games has been recognized as e-sport, and become more popular than a decade ago. Secondly, if it is recognized as an Olympic sport, a lot of young people will have more interest in the Olympic Games. It must be good thing for the Olympic organizer. It is true that some people may get a disease caused by a short of working out or sedentary life style. However, playing video games has been become popular among not only young, but also even adult as e-sports, and it also has potential to make many people to pay more attention toward the Olympic Games. This is why I believe that playing video games should be recognized as an Olympic sport.

English composition:Agrees or disagree Topic is:Violence on TV and the Internet should be centered I agree with the idea that violence on TV and the Internet should be censored and I have two reasons to support this opinion.

First of all, that violence on TV and the Internet increases the rate of crimes. For example, the murders and crimes that hurt people with weapons are influenced by these movies and videos.

Similarly, the bad effects on children are the most serious problem. These violence movies and videos are lead children to the bad behavior adalts, and are also passed on to their children. I think It's a bad cycle.

It's true that TV and the Internet are very convenient in that anyone can search and learn about anything at any time.

However, if you mistake how to use them, it will lead to bad results. Especially, for children, it's difficult to distinguish right from wrong information. Therefore, I believe that violence on TV and the Internet should be censored.

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英文法の質問です！ Dorothy isn't in the office; she ( ) coffee in the cafeteria. （）の中に入るのは

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English composition: Agree or disagree Topic is above the text Topic is: The number of young people who live with their parents after they finish their education will increase in the future.

I agree with that the number of young people who live with their parents after they finish their education will increase in the future and I have two reasons to support this opinion.

To begin with, Japan is facing a long recession, hence many people cannot afford to raise the cost of living as they used to, and if young people are independent of their parents and make a living on their own, they will have to take a part time job. Then they cannot spend time to their hobbies or study.

Secondly, living alone is dangerous. Nowadays, the rate of crimes is increasing, thus many parents often think young people should not live alone. It's true that living with parents is inferior to living alone in terms of personal freedom.

However, considering the cost of living and safety, the choice of that young people are independent of their parents could not say a good choice, therefore, I believe the number of young people who live with their parents after they finish their education will increase in the future.

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